Oh... damn.
Reviewer: Barb Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/08/18 08:27 pm
First off, KatieQ, very nice and intense. Almost cried when Jarod admitted he was defeated and really wonder if you are going to take that line a step futher: "There was another way, one life whose termination would save them all."
Nice seeing Lys back even if she's not doing well. I really feel for her. Miss Jarod's cell mate, the old man. I know you are going to have him fit in some how and am curious. And I miss Parker & Co. next chapter maybe???
Now that's out of the way ... Well it is about time you posted another chapter! I've waited and waited and what do you do? Post it when I'm gone. (wiping away a tear or two) And I suppose since I'll be in Texas next weekend w/o a computer, you'll post another chapter. I'm seriously thinking of of poking you with my sharp pointy stick. I'll have to un-pack it first since I'm planning a trip to see Parker (Thunderchild.) On second thought, you've been hanging around with the Bad Boys of Africa a lot of late, so maybe I'll just save it for Parker. ;)
Author's Response:
hahaha.. you make me laugh RaChell
just because i luv you so muhc, I'll be sure to post the chapter next weekend.. seriously who visits Texas??
although our friendly dictator has told me i cannot post anymore africa until you have agreed to write the next sleepyhead.. so poke that stick in the other direction chiquita.
jokes aside, i'm glad you enjoyed.. lots of MP& co in the next chappie (I know because it's already written) and a bit of our mysterious man.. not to much though.
till next time :P
Reviewer: RaChell Signed
[Report This]Date: 13/05/07 11:10 am
Well, aren't you a cleaver little writer? I would have never thought of the "people he helped"-thing. It's a great twist.
But I'm getting old-guy-in-the-cage-redraws. You're gonna write more about him, right?
Author's Response:
ooh much much much more... but that's all i am saying.
thanks, i'm glad you enjoyed the 'blackmail' thing! I was a tad worried it was maybe lacking in originality a tad.
more to come soon, promise =)
Reviewer: Manoline Signed [Report This]Date: 12/05/07 04:15 pm
Oh no they better not have won. Very nice strategy by the Africans. Lyle had it right when he took Zoe way back when. Messing with those innocents is the only way to beat Jarod. Very nice chapter, can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response:
Hey you should hop over to the forum and take a stab at Sleepyhead.
Glad you agree with the big take down, so to speak. Next chap is almost ready...so beta dependant, should be up in the near future (aka much less time than a month!!)
Thanks for the fb!
Reviewer: TLM Signed
[Report This]Date: 10/05/07 10:31 pm
