Painful to read. Good writing.
Reviewer: Barb Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 27/08/18 08:20 pm
Like that you're involving the Miss Parker & co story more again. And as always I really liked the flashback scene, one of the more plausible explanations as to why/how Miss Parker and Jarod were separated. And interesting twist with the old guy.
Can't wait for more :)
Author's Response:
I do apologizing for neglecting MP&Co.. they are going to become a more dominant force as time proceeds. Thanks for the review :P
and yes.. more 'old' guy to come.. we have big plans for him.. *hint*
Reviewer: Manoline Signed [Report This]Date: 13/04/07 01:44 pm
The Fandom world is a big one, but I'm still glad to see this archive still exists and good stories can be found here.
Great job, Katie.
Jarod's fate is horrible, now even more so because his Sidney and Ms Parker has seen how he is treated.
It's nice you gave him some friend in that cold and gruesome cell.
Take your time, girl, and I do hope this story will go to a more happier end for poor Jarod.
Author's Response:
it's hard to imagine it getting much worse than it is now.. so yes.. happiness will come... eventually. Thanks for popping in from wherever, and for checking out MP and reading the story.. and mostly for giving a bit of feedback. It's definately not what it used to be there. but there is a small core group still going strong! Thanks for enjoying and hopefully you will enjoy the rest that is to come!!
- K
[Report This]Date: 12/04/07 01:24 pm
Oh thank you, thank you, thank you! It was so nice to come back to not one story with new chapters but two! WooHoo! This was great.
I love the way Miss Parker and Jay interact and the way she sees him not as mini Jarod or carbon copy but as a separate person, someone who is exists as a individual. I do like the way you have her so protective of him. That's a nice touch and so beleivble.
I also was wondering about the man in the cage who had looked at Jarod several times. I was happy to see that developed more and am curious where you will take it.
OK, I won't hound you or threaten to send sweepers to your house for a few days. But as soon as the evil stats are gone, I do expect more. :)
Author's Response:
hehehe.. i was not expecting bolded thankyous.. rather bolded WTF took you so long!! LOL.. thanks though.. and I'm glad to hear you liked the MP/Jay interaction.. i was hesitant about it
more of the so called salt n pepper man to come.
as of tonight.. i'm mostly free.. muse might need a day or two to be coaxed out of the dark hole it was shoved into.. but hopefully words shall start flowing again!
- K
Reviewer: RaChell Signed [Report This]Date: 10/04/07 07:45 pm
