Looking forward to MP's return. Poor Jarod..just god.
Reviewer: Barb Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/08/18 08:02 pm
Whoa... You've got to be kidding!! Gemini II?? They know a good pretender when they see one, but who cares if they mistreat him to death, they'll make another one! What monsters! Intense!
Great chapter! Only came across one error... in Jarod's dream. "Too ( not 'to' ) similar to the...."
I hope Miss Parker sees all this... and gets him out soon!
As always, at the edge of my seat!
Reviewer: Beka Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 18/04/07 10:53 pm
Very intense! I was hoping for more of Miss Pparker and company and their plans of rescue. Maybe in the next chapter?
Author's Response: Yeah sorry muse was not cooperating on MP& Co for awhile there. They are back (as you already know now.. just catching up now that reviews are fixed and such..) and muse seems to be holding strong so far.
[Report This]Date: 11/03/07 05:48 pm
Oh it just keeps getting worse doesn't it? Well I'm definitely beginning to understand why the Triumvirate is so feared. poor, poor Jarod *shudder*.
And like I told you last time, this is a compliment so...*shudder* Please continue
Author's Response:
hahaha.. worse and worse and worse! Thanks for the feedback, especially now I can respond without the help of my secretary.. not that Jacci will ever read this... lol.
Stick with it.. it can't be bad forever... or can it? ;)
Date: 11/03/07 03:50 am
