I wonder if they will succeed in breaking J. Hope Parker and gang hurry.
Reviewer: Barb Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 27/08/18 07:52 pm
I love it so far!!!! It's just, so... so Pretenderish, I can't stand it!!! Great keeping w/ the characters, and I can't wait to read the contining saga of this fic and Surrender!!! I've only just now able to get online, so I REALLY can't wait to read more!!
Reviewer: Crackerjacknpez Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/06/07 01:53 pm
Great last couple chapters!!!! (I can't remember if I've reviewed for the first several, so "Grrreat Story so far!!!) ;-) Keep it up!!!! It's interesting to wonder if isolation really is the worst torture a person can go through. I'm looking forward to seeing how Jarod fares... I'm picturing Jarod just coping just like how he does, when he's alone, pretending the others aren't there, but we shall see. Then again, maybe he'll interact w/ them, and help them return to the mental living? Hope the next chappie is coming soon.
Author's Response:
awww is that a Sydney grrreat... how great are accents.
I'll try to keep them coming as quickly as possible. It's a rough patch. but school nastiness is about to calm down... good for the muse. Thanks so much for the feedback. I have other plans for Jarod, as I do agree, just being alone won't do it.. not at least for in a viable timeframe.
Reviewer: Crackerjacknpez Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/03/07 02:37 pm
Just when I didn't think it could get worse for Jarod!
Author's Response:
Nice to hear from you again =).
Things can always get worse.. but i will make a promise that they will get better... eventually ;)
Reviewer: Patricia_D Signed [Report This]Date: 07/03/07 02:23 pm
Nice going even if it did make me a bit sick to my stomach! Africa is not on my travel plans after this story. I keep waiting for MP, the gang and Jay to do something to rescue them, (Jarod & Lys) I mean she does get rescued right? You can't leave her there!
I have to be out of town so won't be on-line for several days. I'll be looking forward to more when I get back. (meaning you have 3 days to get to work. Hint Hint) :)
Author's Response:
hahaha.. it's already done,going through the beta process.. nice try though. Thanks for the feedback, I'm glad we are being successfully creepy.
Taking the 5th on Lys.
Reviewer: RaChell Signed [Report This]Date: 03/03/07 09:40 pm
That cell really creeps me out. Which is a huge compliment, means your writing is working. Can't wait to be further creeped out
Author's Response: hahahaha.. yay!! i creeped someone out!! My work is done here. Thanks so much for the fb Manoline. Next one will be up and out ASAP.
Date: 03/03/07 08:25 am
