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Title: Chapter 4 - And So It Begins

That was ughhh painful to read.

Reviewer: Barb Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27/08/18 07:41 pm
Title: Chapter 4 - And So It Begins

I know I'm not supposed to because he's the guy who tortures Jarod, and basically a sosiopath. But I really like the mean PTB-guy. It will be interesting to see where you take it from here...as it always is.



Author's Response:

Hey!

Glad you are enjoying him, although he is relatively ambigious at this stage in the game. I think he get's a name in the next chapter. Thanks again for the feedback! Always appreciated =) 

Reviewer: Manoline Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/02/07 06:03 am
Title: Chapter 4 - And So It Begins

What a delightful surprise and so nice to wake up this morning to find a new chapter. Intense as always and a must read. Now I am looking forward to the next chapter. It just keeps getting better and better. I nominate you to take over the next Pretender movie KatieQ! Who needs Craig and Steve when we have you?
Edited to add: I couldn't stop thinking about your story all day! I can't wait for the next chapter. :)

Author's Response: Aww RaChell you are much to kind! Next two chapters (almost three) are with my super fabulous beta team who are really making this story what it has become. Try my best to bring you the next chapter soon.. i know how hard it is to wait when you are enjoying something.. *cough* hint to Jacci and Onisius re: AWP..hehehe

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/02/07 02:05 pm
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