Wow really picking up the pace now.
Reviewer: Barb Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 27/08/18 07:39 pm
The real fight is on! I can see your story in my mind's eye. You write with such description! It'll be a hard fight, but everyone underestimates Jarod!
Author's Response: Yay! Welcome to the sequel. alh tough I imagine it's not as much fun as CZero given it's not done. I'm writing as fast as I can.. schools slowed me down.. but rough path is almost over. Thanks so much for the feedback and enjoy the remaining chapters.. 2/3 of the way done the next :D
[Report This]Date: 28/03/07 08:06 am
I really like your take on Emily, knocking some sense into the guys sounds like her thing to do. And I can't wait for the next chapter. (Let the torture begin! muhaha)
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked Em! She's the big sis i wish I was.. hehehe.. little bros are too damn annoying for that. Jarod's plight will soon be up. Hope you enjoy thank. Thanks as always!! :D
Date: 03/02/07 02:19 am
Very very nice! Not as intense as the previous ones but you leave the ending with enough foreboding to know the next one should be really exciting. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: hehehe calm before the storm.. you think right (well at least i hope!)
[Report This]Date: 02/02/07 12:59 am
