Yep a tease but so good.
Reviewer: Barb Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 27/08/18 07:23 pm
My preferences are not your problem! Please do not take my last review to heart in that what I prefer or not.
Your story was well written, clear and smooth. I wish I could write as well.
I do look forward to seeing how you end this.
Author's Response:
Hey!
Thanks for the additional comment - and really it's great that you voiced your opinion. Anything is constructive. It's wonderful to hear that people are enjoying the read, but hearing constructive comments about characterizations, what people want to see etc is the only way any of us are going to get better!
Many thanks as to go to my beta's. I've been sending them some scary stuff lately, and they deserve all the credit for taking my garbled ideas and smoothing them together.
Thanks again - hope to hear from you next chapter ;)
Reviewer: Bucky Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/02/08 11:24 am
Nice to see you decided to grace us with another chapter while I was gone! About time and a exciting one too. Yes, I want to know about Lys also and just how is the old man going to help? Love the interaction with Miss Parker and Syd. As for Broots and J, what a hoot! Now do I have to plan another trip to Texas to get another chapter out of you?
Author's Response:
please..don't visit texas on my behalf..the consequences of too much time there are to too dire..
i'm glad you enjoyed, and for your information i am happily writing away.. so it shouldn't be too long. but as always.. it's gotta go through the beta's first. :)
hope you had fun in texas
and i promise.. lys.. weird old man.. all shall be revealed...soon...ish...
Reviewer: RaChell Signed [Report This]Date: 24/05/07 09:37 pm
Tell those beta's of yours to hurry up. I want next chappie
:d
Author's Response: have any suggestion on how i can speed up their lazy asses?? Reviewer: jaccione Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/05/07 08:46 am
OK KatieQ! Stop procasinating and get on with it! We need more! :)
Author's Response: Sorry RaChell.. actually been a good student lately! I am trying, I'm sorry I've gotten so behind!! I've been working hard on the next bit.. it's 2/3rd done.. so soon! I promise. Keep the motivation coming.. lol..sometimes a good kick in the ass helps.
Date: 29/03/07 07:44 pm
Wow.....cruelty needs a new word. There are a few grammatical errors, but like the artist on a canvas, you seem to be the servant of the story, as with Conflict Zero, and it comes alive!
Author's Response:
hey beka!
sorry about the errors.. i posted the prologue in a bit of haste and THAT SO BACKFIRED! hopefully the rest is not to bad.. it gets looked at by three diff people, including myself (although i'm terrible.) Thanks to the superstar trio that makes up the beta (aka keep katie's ass in line brutesquad).
I'm glad you are seeing the story. It means I'm doing my job. :D
- K
Reviewer: Beka Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/03/07 05:14 pm
Oh poor Jarod. I want that poor man out of there pronto haha. Your story's wonderful and fortunately or unfortunately I can really feel Jarod's despair. Let's get him out of that hellhole okay? haha
Author's Response:
Even I can't leave him there forever.. I'm glad you are enjoying and suffering a bit along with J.. cue evil laugh. I'll stop soon, I promise. Thanks for the feedback :)
and PS
WRITE MORE OF YOUR STORY!! ;)
Reviewer: TLM Signed [Report This]Date: 12/03/07 01:52 pm
oh, whew! when i read ch 1 last nite, i thought i was going to have to call raines on you for a cliffhanger that big!!!!! i'm already so involved w/ the story, i thought i was going bonkers out of impatience to read more. thanks for posting ch 2!!! i'm reading it tonite. THANK YOU!!! oh, and KEEP IT UP!!! :-p
Author's Response:
Hey!!
I'm glad you enjoyed the little teaser i through out there.. allbeit a bit cruel..hehehe. I'll try to keep this coming out ASAP. Happy reading =)
[Report This]Date: 25/01/07 07:03 pm
Stupid me did not heed warnings about reading first part first, but I will now. This was good and now i need to read the first one.
Author's Response: thanks so much for the review :D. i'm glad you enjoyed.. good luck getting caught up with story 1.. it got a little long.. it ran away from me so to speak.. hehehe
[Report This]Date: 24/01/07 07:23 pm
loving it so far :)
Author's Response: thanks for the positive feedback.. i hope you'll enjoy what's coming!! it's going to be a LONG ride.. hehehe
Date: 24/01/07 02:10 pm
Nice start. I hope this is only a taste of things to come. You had betterg et busy or else your readers will have to contract with the Centre and send some sweepers your way for a little 'encouragement' in producing the next chapter. ;)
Author's Response:
hahaha.. that was subtle.. thanks for the review, and i promise that chapter one willl be coming very shortly.. it's at the final stages of betaing.. and i may or may not have the the next five already written...*cough*
as Syd would say.. patience ;)
i know it was a mean teaser.. nothing more. Reviewer: RaChell Signed [Report This]Date: 24/01/07 01:43 pm
