Yay, finally Jarod comes to help. Great chapter.
Reviewer: Ann Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 01/07/07 11:55 am
Be careful. If the figure is still a ways away, then it could be MP in her all-leather B&D outfit and toting her gun. Have you been doing anything you shouldn't have lately?
Author's Response:
Me??? Something i shouldn't have done???? Never, i am always a good girl :d
If it is MP in some kind of B/D outfit, i will be running away screaming for help?
Lmao, what a truly terrifying image
Reviewer: Tinanaz Signed [Report This]Date: 17/06/07 05:50 pm
Your story has taken a riviting turn. Can't wait to see what happens next. But are you sure that black leather clad form headed your way isn't Arygle 'pretending' to be Jarod ?
yes, I am still suffering from PCD as you can see!
Author's Response: If it is Argyle, then someone is going to be hurt in the worst possible way. Me NEEDS Jarod right now, and is long overdue to get some Jarod-action in this story. Reviewer: RaChell Signed
[Report This]Date: 17/06/07 05:31 pm
I feel this piece is really taking a turn for the contemporary. Including the "*" mostly known from IM'ing and chatting, while still spelling your words out sort of signefes Jarod to me. Taking the best of popular culture and then mix it with his own personal style, which is so often viewed as being his genius, his intelligence.
And the lack of period at the end...pure genious! It leaves an opening, a sort of "yes my children, there is more to come".
Author's Response:
I am so glad you like my mix of styles, keeps it fresh and vibrant
hee hee
Reviewer: Manoline Signed [Report This]Date: 17/06/07 04:50 pm
