The suspense! It's Killing ME! And Making Me Use Random CaPITALS!
Symbol is symbolism, isn't it? I knew it. I totally knew it. Only I and a few others *get* the depth of this story. This is just so good.
Author's Response: I am SO glad you saw the symbolism in my use of symbol, i was scared i might have been a little too obscure.
the #&%$ popping up in random spots is giving me some grief. Damn the symbols I say!
Reviewer: Blade Mistress Signed
[Report This]Date: 04/02/07 10:28 pm
I see the best is yet to come! 'more trouble on the way'.
Author's Response: Ahhh *sighs* indeed it is Patricia_D, as i am sure the next chapter will reveal.
[Report This]Date: 04/02/07 06:48 pm
Wow. More trouble on the way? Is it trouble for Miss Parker, Jarod, Sydney, or Broots? Or maybe someone else? I am on the edge of my seat with worry.
Author's Response: Soon the trouble will be revealed I hope, and am hanging out for a happy ending on this one.
Date: 04/02/07 01:45 am
Oh, Jacci! you're really taking this story to a whole new level. Now even your chapter notes are closely tied in with the plotline. " - symbol - "how bold of you to confess to the abnormaly high amount of metaphores in your work.
Author's Response: Thanks Manolie. I fear you where prophetic with your prediction. Indeed it has all turned to you-know-what again as I am struggling with yet another update and more chapters soon to reveal that plot twist. Reviewer: Manoline Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/02/07 02:27 am
How did I miss chapter 6! "more trouble on the way-" has a foreboding sound to it. It sends shivers down my spine just thinking of the possiblities! Does this mean trouble for Jarod and Miss Parker? Or just Miss Parker? She really is in the middle, caught between Jarod and the Centre. Of course it could spell trouble for Sydney or Broots.
Lyle as we all know is as slippery as they come. He slides out of trouble without any problems most of the time and always manages to re-invent himself. Of course he did lose a thumb. I'm sure had it been anyone else they would have lost their life. I'm sitting on the edge of my set in anticapation waiting for the next chapter!
And Jacs, thanks for asking if I would like to co-author the next chapter. What can I say but that I am honored by your offer. (blushing) But I must decline. You are doing so well on your own and such a inspiration, that I feel what little I could add would be a detriment instead of a help.
Author's Response: Well then, I am of course disappoointed, but shall battle on. I think you are underestimating your own talents here. There has been much movement in the updates of the script and so i fear even more trouble is on the way, which of course, means more chapters.
[Report This]Date: 31/01/07 11:11 pm
Thanks for your answers! LOL In fact, I saw so many reviews so I read some of them, sayiçng "it's a wonderfull story"... etc and I thought it was the story of the year!! lol I feel ridiculous because if I had read more closely, I would have found that the reviews were a joke!! LOL
Author's Response: I feel a little ridiculous myself for not deleting it in the first place. Now however, i am very glad i didnt because this certainly has been fun and reading the reveiws are as enjoyable as reading an actual fanfic.
Date: 31/01/07 08:55 am
Oh my god, the plot thickens - and with another cliffhanger to boot. Who's gonna be in trouble and why? I bet one of Jarod's litte stunts backfired. Or is it touble in JMP-heaven?
You really got me sitting on the edge of my seat here. Once again I have to congratulate you on your amazing talent to create such atmosphere with so little words.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words. I think I can promise a flurry of activity soon. With the new upgrade out and more patches on the way, I am expecting quite a bit more trouble. Reviewer: Cathy Signed
[Report This]Date: 31/01/07 02:32 am
