I might be a just a tiny bit bias, but I really liked the chapter. It's a long time since I've seen a tPfic about us writers. Though it's about time! (it's a nice way to keep 'em active) And I think you kept the writers pretty well ic. And that is difficult ;)

I can't help wondering...do we have the makings of another "Pretender Payback" on our hands?

Nice job, and I will be waiting for your next fic