this story is great! i love the flow of it.
i especially liked the tenderness between Miss P. and Jarod in this chapter. great writing.
can't wait for more :o)
peace!Reviewer: Jazzy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/09/07 01:50 am
So glad that you're back with more!! I really liked the chapter. I am curious to find out who this woman is that Lyle is chatting with (did you reveal that already and I missed it?) I don't think so, but just checkin'. Anyway, great story, so excited for more!Reviewer: Twingirl10 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 31/08/07 08:41 pm
Hello, hello! I am really enjoying your story. I can't wait to see what happens next. I am such a Jarod and Miss Parker shipper fan, so I am always happy to read fanfic that really makes it believable. You really pull it off very well. Kudos!
Twingirl10Reviewer: Twingirl10 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27/07/07 08:42 pm
So I finally got around to reading your latest chapter Whashaza. And I love it!
The intro-scene from Stand Up Guy (?) was just a perfect fit, and you wrote it very nicely I must say. Also love how you portray Jarod's need to believe all is right with Ben, when he obviously knows it isn't.Reviewer: Manoline Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/07/07 06:39 am
I usually hate shipping, but you actually make it interesting and believable. More please!Reviewer: MP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/07/07 11:44 am
Wow, what a really great story. I am really enjyoing it. Hope to see more soon!!
P.S. I have some of your other stories and have really enjoyed them all. You have a such a talent. Keep it up. :o)
Reviewer: Twingirl10 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 17/07/07 07:08 pm
I was kinda lost with the story's time but finally I understood.
This chapter gave me answers to some of my questions, all I want now is the sequel! ;p
Reviewer: Julia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16/07/07 10:10 am