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Title: Connections

I hadn't read this one yet, because I'm not very fond of stories where Jarod and Parker have dozens of children, so I was a bit diffident. Then I came across chapter "Connections" and I read its final lines. It was amazing, so I decided to read the whole story and it was totally worth it. Your Jarod is always so sweet and full of regrets, while you always picture a very compassionate Miss Parker.
The thing I like the most in your stories is the way you describe the children and their bond with Jarod and Parker (I'm thinking about Charlie in Stumbling toward Nirvana or Teddy in Veil of Contentment).
With four of them here, it was a hard time for you, but I love the differences in their behaviour. JR is my fave and the scene with J dancing with Catherine really broke my heart, I was actually crying!
And even if in this story you didn't give so much space to Parker and Jarod's relationship, it was lovely to see her signs of affection for him. Like when they held each other.
You're always the best, Phenyx. Thanks for writing such beautiful fan fictions.

Reviewer: missparker87 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27/11/13 03:46 pm
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