I've never been much into the S/M thing but I decided to read this because I enjoyed your other story, which was NC-17 too but was also full of funny and hot dialogues between J and MP. This fic although was OOC for me, I just couldn't imagine them in such situations and especially MP not telling Jarod ''go to hell!!!'' after what he has done with the other woman.

Still, thanks for sharing:)

one of the best ever in the history of pretender fics!!!!

I really enjoyed reading this story.  I read a few J/MP S&M / Dom/sub type fics on adultfanfiction, but most of the stories there are more slash than anything else.  I loved the great detail you used in the sexual content in the beginning when he was trying to get to her, but I was a bit disappointed that you didn't use the same detail when they actually made love.  I think it would have been nice to see a more loving and mutual wanting and sensual side to their love making after seeing the dominant I can do what I want to side of Jarod.  You seemed to gloss over the actual coming together of the two.  I also don't think Parker would want him after she watched him screw someone else.  She is very vandictive that way, speaking of which I think she might have pushed the test after and started to make love to Malcolm just to spite him.  I think she knows him well enough to know he would hate it if she complied.  Just my opinion, but I still really enjoyed it. 

I also read the sequal which was disappointing only because of them dying in the end.  So sad.  I loved the way they found their way back to each other.  FAte can be a wonderful thing.  I can't wait to read more of your work, it really is wonderful.

Wendy