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Title: Can't Stay Away

I really appreciated this one. The whole story with double POV is well written. Parker's doubts are very realistic but I love the fact she surrendered at the end. I guess if Jarod used the right words, she'd melt down easily! Thank you!!

 Reviewer: missparker87 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/02/13 01:18 am
Title: Choices Made

Goooood,that was beautiful!!!
Adored this story! The fact that Lyle wnats to kill off Parker seems veeery plausibel to me and that Raines doesn't mind is just plain logical. But the twist with an alive and kicking Daddy-dearest who also wants his Angel's death makes it all the better. Although I would've loved to see more action,scheming and angsty drama in this story until those 2 found their happy ending(which isn't a 100%-ending if u think about it...sequel in the making maybe? ;-)) I did enjoy it a lot!
I do think the whole story with Mr Parker showing up and all 3 bad guys wanting MissP's death while J and MP team up together to find their freedom and happiness holds a huge potential!
Loved your dream sequences in the first chapters and had a hard laugh at the J-MP-incident where she was throwing a 9iron at him >He wasn't that bad last night, was he?

 Reviewer: IceAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/10 10:54 pm
Title: Choices Made

I'm glad for the happy ending.  =)  It made a very good bedtime story!

 Reviewer: Danielle SmileyFace Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/03/10 07:14 am
Title: Can't Stay Away

Yay!  hehe =)

 Reviewer: Danielle SmileyFace Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/03/10 06:47 am
Title: Choices Made

I am so delighted that you finally gave us the final piece of this timeless story. I've been looking forward to reading the ending for quite some time and now I can with certaintly that I've enjoyed your story from start to wonderful finish. I hope to read more from you.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/03/10 09:15 pm
Title: Patience is Not a Virtue

Good plot and theme! You've gotta update this one! Can't wait to see what Lyle will do this time around.

 Reviewer: electricq Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/02/10 08:13 am
Title: Can't Stay Away

It says "completed" but it isn't! I wouldn't have read it otherwise *disappointed*

 Is it too much to hope that you will complete this?

Reviewer: Mia Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/02/08 12:15 pm
Title: Can't Stay Away

Hi, I like your story very much. I read it, when I need some good romance and Im very glad that you give them happyend:)

 Reviewer: lucitana Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/07/06 11:56 am
Title: Patience is Not a Virtue

I would like to read an ending to this story!! You write with sutch feeling for the carakters...

 Reviewer: aartemis Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/02/06 08:59 pm
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