Title: Part 1

Ok, I loved conversation between Syd and Parker so much!

“You can’t just let him......." her voice died out with emotion, but a moment later she rallied. 
 
“At least I know he won’t harm Jarod, the Triumvirate would have his head.....”
 
Her voice was soft, almost lost. “But there will be regrets,” her eyes filled with unshed tears as she continued, “at least two of them...”
 
Her voice was a bare whisper, but it caused a pang in Sydney’s heart. “But Jarod won’t...”

This is one of the sweetest things I've ever read here! Thank you!

Reviewer: missparker87 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/03/13 11:46 am
Title: Chapter 9

While I thoroughly enjoyed the story and reading, I'm afraid the genetics are a bit off -- if Miss Parker is a clone of Catherine Parker then her DNA must be identical to Catherine's, so Sydney's DNA could not have been used in the process. 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 21/10/11 10:20 pm
Title: Part 1

you need to write more this is such a good story and you just can't end it here. I want to see what happens when miss parker gets told the truth or finds it out herself. please write more! Don't leave me hanging.

Reviewer: megann Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/05/11 05:39 am
Title: Chapter 9

I read this story some time ago, and it has the same affect on me now as it did then! It hold me on the edge of my seat and fills me with emotion that even most of my favorite episodes didn't.

Your writing is so crisp, clear and perfect. Every word is in the exact place it needs to be to tell the story so perfectly.

Is there anything new from you? I miss your pretender stories! 

 

 



Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words... as to new things - I actually did upload three that I wrote several years ago, but I don't believe are on any other site.  They should be viewable under "most recent." cheers!

Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/06/08 05:21 am
Title: Part 1

Even though I've read this several time over the past, it still graps me by the heart. I thoroughly enjoy your touch in writing, and have missed it.

Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/07/07 07:02 pm
Title: Part 1

Great story, I enjoyed it very much. Looking forward to the next chapters.

Reviewer: Mel Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/09/05 12:17 am
Title: Part 8

Someone recommended your stories to me. I found all they had to say to be true. Well written and very unique. Please continue this. It is worth reading and cries for an ending.

Reviewer: Bucky Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/07/05 02:27 am
Title: Part 8

Poor MP! I feel sorry for her. I wonder what was on the DSA. Anyway, VERY Interesting. Please update the story as soon as possible. I can't wait. Thanks and have a nice day.

Reviewer: chocofan Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/05/05 11:10 am


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