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Oh wow, I've been so pleased with the 'random' fics that pop up on the home page.

I love the way Zoe maintains her composure until Jarod leaves, and no, she doesn't know him. This is very much how the Z/J story could have played out. Even though she's carefree and in some ways childlike, (strawberry chapstick- so Zoe- like) I believe she would 'know enough' to know when to fold the cards and end the game. 

Simply put, this fic is brilliant.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/05/09 01:11 am
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Lovely written. I love the way you used repeated " if she knew him better" throughout the story, it ties it all together. It's very much in character too, which only makes me like it more.

Reviewer: Manoline Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/01/07 06:51 am


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