This is SO promising.

As everything you write ;)

Rossy

That was a fast update young lady and as always of pretender caliber, packed with action and fast paced. Top notch writing all the way. I can't wait to see how Jarod and Miss P work together and how she'll repay him.

Hey awesome you updated so fast! phew things got heated really intense with those 2 just like on my DVDs I love it!

You're on the few authors I keep coming back to, one of the few talented, and stories like this are why. Will there be romance in this eventually? Either way, I want more.

Exquisite as always, Mirage.

"Mr. Woozy." "Patchwork" of horrors. Those are references to the Wizard of Oz works, aren't they? I love that you included them, a little nod and homage, and it fit in so subtly and naturally. Now I'm wondering what other Easter eggs I've missed over the years. I also love that you pay homage to canon and provide continuity. You reminded me of the picnic scene that I'd honestly almost forgotten. Little Parker said she hopes the man she loves makes her lightheaded too. Now she's hanging out with Jarod and is experiencing vertigo but her mom is suggesting it's not just the boat causing it. I love your insights into the inner sense and how it works and how Parker is sitting there while Jarod cooks but her mind is engaged elsewhere. Jarod senses she doesn't feel well and that something else is going on and cooks her dry toast without drawing attention to it. I hope she hasn't been impregnated the way Catherine was, and thank you so much for this stand Parker has taken to not forgive and finally realize that her father basically raped Catherine to impregnate her with Ethan. It was always strange that Parker would shrug off something that traumatic and tragic and keep trying to please her father after that ultimate betrayal. This is real character growth and I agree with everything you said about lines being crossed, the taboo of estrangement. It's funny that this is considered a family show but it's centered around a dysfunctional family that is killing Parker. The writing is real and raw and I think maybe you can relate in some way. I can relate too. You really know the characters and where to put them. Please continue.

Ciao!

Wow,  you combine elegance and action beautifully. I wish there was another chapter. Please share more soon. Thank you.

You sure know how to get my attention! Action, drama, adventure. These are the things I love most about the series and you excel at those, and plotting, writing, story telling, and characterizations.

Oh, I love it. Please keep going. You really capture the characters incredibly well.. they're so wonderfully fleshed out, real enough to touch. I want more.

It's actually plausible that Broots would suffer this way. He kept saying he was having a breakdown in one of those movies, and we know how protective he is of Debbie and children in general. It's also plausible that the Centre would want to protect its assetts by wiping the memory of employees on their way out. Brilliantly plotted. You have another chapter already waiting for us. This one's really clicking along. Thank you for sharing your natural gifts.

Please keep going.

Ooohh uh. Dyyyamn. I'm sitting here trying to figure out what I love more about your stories. Is it the stellar story telling, the lyrical prose and writing, or the freaking on-the-nose characterisations? I've never seen the characters behave more like the characters since watching thte characters on the series... I have a paid subscription so I can watch The Pretender and read your stories and now I stare off like... they are the same when you write them. It's scary and I love it. You are my favorite author, the one that keeps me coming back. You keep the series alive for me and I'm grateful. Thank you. Thank  you. Thank you. Please never stop writing.

Ooh, I love it. More please?