This was impressive, as everything you write. I also like the idea.
But it was very sad. =(
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing, MissParker87. It's a honor to be read and reviewed by authors (you and Miss KS- you are all too kind). I appreciate your taking the time to read and review.
Reviewer: missparker87 Signed [Report This]Date: 31/08/14 06:30 pm
Hardly a trifle! Anything you write however short is well worth reading!
Thank you for posting!
Very sad and poignant! The hand on the glass reversal was brilliant!
No tweaking necessary!!!
YOU are the Queen of Pretender fan fiction!
Author's Response:
Aw, thank you for reading and for reviewing, Twisted. Your continued support is appreciated.
Reviewer: twisted Anonymous [Report This]Date: 31/08/14 03:30 pm
Words won't say how much I love this. It's beautiful and it is perfect. Don't change it and please please Mirage continue this. Thank you for sharing your talent and yes you are talented!! I read that last email and you don't know how good you are. You are my favorite author that must mean something. Update soon!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, Mlle Parker, for reading and reviewing. You're too kind.
Reviewer: MlleParker Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 31/08/14 04:30 am
You should be indulding the muse all you want. I love it. A surprise ending short story. You are the master! Or mistress lol. There were no typos and I wouldnt' care anyway. Gah, you're amazing. Keep writing.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Gunner. It's much appreciated.
Reviewer: Gunner Signed [Report This]Date: 31/08/14 02:14 am
Oh oh!! I love it Mirage. You are spectacular. I've read other stories where Jarod jails Miss Parker but never done so well. I'd love to see where your muse would take us all. Keep going please!
Author's Response:
Thank you, Simone. I'll have to consult with the muse. We shall see.
Reviewer: Simone Anonymous [Report This]Date: 31/08/14 01:51 am
Amazing! What a lovely surprise! I'm glad you let your muse lead. She's always right. This is brilliant as are all your other fics. Do continue. I love that Jarod is sorry about having her imprisoned. Very strong emotions and characters here. This is why you are my favorite author. Please give us more!
Author's Response:
Thank you, Dark Angel. I'm glad you enjoyed this.
Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed [Report This]Date: 30/08/14 11:42 pm
Perfect. Your fiction always is! You conveyed more than the gooyeenss which I love you conveyed emotions and loss, time passing, so much. It was beatufiul and heartfelt. Please continue this. I've always wanted to see you take this direction.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing, Pretenderoxx. Mm I wasn't intending to continue this- but then, I wasn't intending to write this little ficlet either. We shall see.
Reviewer: pretenderoxx Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/08/14 08:08 pm
