can't wait for the sequel !
Reviewer: wanda Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/08/07 09:39 am
ooh .. i am so very interested to see where you are going to take this. i have a feeling that things may not be as they seem, or maybe not, it's hard to stop thinking that everything is a conspiracy... but great writing and sorry for the rambling review.
Reviewer: KatieQ Signed [Report This]Date: 31/07/07 02:50 pm
WOW! Very intense and so well done! Looking forward to seeing where you take this story.
Reviewer: RaChell Signed [Report This]Date: 31/07/07 02:49 pm
She's not dead, right? Tell me she's not dead! What's Jarod going to do now? Who put the bomb in the office in the first place?
See, you need to update soon, or I might die of curiosity ;-)
Other than that: very well written, especially Broots' thoughts on Miss Parker.
Reviewer: Cathy Signed [Report This]Date: 31/07/07 09:45 am
great start! you really make the characters true and that is very hard to do... since they're both whackos :o)
can't wait to read more. don't let us wait too long :o)
peace!
Reviewer: Jazzy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/07/07 08:11 am
What a great start! I'm glad Jarod and Parker's relationship is growing slowly. It wouldn't be realistic for them to jump right into it after the island. Can't wait for your next chapter.
Reviewer: TLM Signed [Report This]Date: 29/07/07 05:54 pm
Very nice beginning. Like the way you jump from Miss Parker's end of the conversation to Jarod's, it works remarcably well.
Reviewer: Manoline Signed [Report This]Date: 29/07/07 05:32 am
Interesting beginning. So, where are you going with this? Please update soon!
Reviewer: Cathy Signed [Report This]Date: 28/07/07 08:45 am
cool.... thx for clarifying about the sequel. u must know what we're all waiting for.. :-p
Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signed [Report This]Date: 28/07/07 07:42 am
Psycho path... hilarious. Good so far.
Reviewer: Somnabulist Signed [Report This]Date: 28/07/07 07:14 am
Very interesting beginning!! I'm curious to see where you take us!
Reviewer: KatieQ Signed [Report This]Date: 28/07/07 07:09 am