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Title: Part 1

Hi, I m sorry this was your only story. It's truly amazing it's your first. You have a wonderful talent. I hope you keep writing because it's great!!!

I d love to read more of your work

 Reviewer: Mverderber Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/25 05:57 pm
Title: Part 1

Hi again, I know it's been years since you added to this story but you have one huge fan that d love to see it finished. I've read it multiple times and I d love another 50 chapters it's the opus of pretender stories. I ve now read over 200 stories yours is still number 1 in my book. 

I have some ideas about where the story could go if you ever start writing again

 Reviewer: Mverderber Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/10/24 07:55 pm
Title: Part 1

Hi again, I know it's been years since you added to this story but you have one huge fan that d love to see it finished. I've read it multiple times and I d love another 50 chapters it's the opus of pretender stories. I ve now read over 200 stories yours is still number 1 in my book. 

I have some ideas about where the story could go if you ever start writing again

 Reviewer: Mverderber Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/10/24 07:54 pm
Title: Part 1

Awesome story!!!! 

I would so love to read more from you. I have read over 175 stories an this is by far my favorite story. 

I wish you would write some more!

 Reviewer: Mverderber Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/10/24 11:40 pm
Title: Part 50c part 2

Honestly ? Very interesting for a Jarodcentric which is new for me . And after all that he's been through  , I know there's still more ahead to come but don't you think it's about time that  Jarod and co have their Happily Ever After ?

 Reviewer: tana Signed [Report This]
Date: 31/05/16 12:18 pm
Title: Part 1

"Jarod had blacked out again and Raines was losing patients."

Really? All his patients were dying?  Or perhaps he was losing patience.

 Reviewer: Cole Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 30/01/11 06:40 am
Title: Part 1

Great story!  I hope you get to finish it!  If you need help with editing/grammar I can help.  I did book editing for a transcription company. 

 Reviewer: VictoriaC Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/12/08 03:17 pm
Title: Part 50c part 2

Hmmmmm ~ another really good story that seems to have been abandoned :(

 Reviewer: JeanneB Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 22/09/08 12:26 am
Title: Part 50c part 2

I really love this story. Love that Miss Parker and Sydney are helping Jarod go through all of this. Glad that Jarod finally has his whole family together. Miss Parker is now a target because of the baby. Would love for you to update this wonderful story because I would love to read it.

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Date: 05/05/07 08:59 pm
Title: Part 50c part 2

So glad that you have posted more of this story since the last time i read it,i look forward to reading more soon,great writing 5star

 Reviewer: julie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/02/07 02:52 pm
Title: Part 41

Good story...hope there's more coming. :-)

Reviewer: whashaza Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/09/06 09:51 pm
Title: Part 1

this story is great loved reading it hope theres more t o come please

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Date: 06/12/05 09:56 am
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