Hi, I m sorry this was your only story. It's truly amazing it's your first. You have a wonderful talent. I hope you keep writing because it's great!!!
I d love to read more of your work
Reviewer: Mverderber Signed [Report This]Date: 10/04/25 05:57 pm
Hi again, I know it's been years since you added to this story but you have one huge fan that d love to see it finished. I've read it multiple times and I d love another 50 chapters it's the opus of pretender stories. I ve now read over 200 stories yours is still number 1 in my book.
I have some ideas about where the story could go if you ever start writing again
Reviewer: Mverderber Signed [Report This]Date: 10/10/24 07:55 pm
Hi again, I know it's been years since you added to this story but you have one huge fan that d love to see it finished. I've read it multiple times and I d love another 50 chapters it's the opus of pretender stories. I ve now read over 200 stories yours is still number 1 in my book.
I have some ideas about where the story could go if you ever start writing again
Reviewer: Mverderber Signed [Report This]Date: 10/10/24 07:54 pm
Awesome story!!!!
I would so love to read more from you. I have read over 175 stories an this is by far my favorite story.
I wish you would write some more!
Reviewer: Mverderber Signed [Report This]Date: 01/10/24 11:40 pm
"Jarod had blacked out again and Raines was losing patients."
Really? All his patients were dying? Or perhaps he was losing patience.
Reviewer: Cole Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/01/11 06:40 am
Great story! I hope you get to finish it! If you need help with editing/grammar I can help. I did book editing for a transcription company.
Reviewer: VictoriaC Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 23/12/08 03:17 pm
this story is great loved reading it hope theres more t o come please
Reviewer: julie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/12/05 09:56 am
