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Title: Chapter 7

Epic. You have a natural talent and skill and the way you masterfully craft each story is a gift. It's always a pleasure to read you. Thank you for sharing your 🎁 with us.

Reviewer: Jake Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/03/24 07:03 pm
Title: Chapter 7

Woot! I love seeing Mirage updates on the front page! This is an amazing story and I thank you for writing it and writing it beautifully and I congratulate you on completing it and I love the way you ended it with the promise of a sequel!

Thank you so much!!

Reviewer: Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/03/24 06:26 pm
Title: Chapter 7

More more more! I love it all so much!

You are so amazing 🤩❤️😍🥰🥰

 I can't wait to read the sequel!!

Reviewer: Leslie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/03/24 03:06 am
Title: Chapter 7

Enjoyable from the beginning to the end.....almost end. Fast paced, action packed, perfect characterisations, brilliantly executed story..

I eagerly await your sequel.

Reviewer: Kyle McLane Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/03/24 10:57 pm
Title: Chapter 7

Oohhh I already want the sequel!  I'm usually patient...waited for a end to The Pretender TV show for ages but I crave more of your writing so hard.

More please.

 

Reviewer: Leese Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/03/24 10:17 pm
Title: Chapter 7

oh wow this was amazing. Parker doesn't like owning anyone and wants to pay immediately not have debts.  This is so in character. Isaac is adorable. I can't wait to find out in the sequel if the implosion goes as planned.

Thank you for this! We can't let the series die.

Reviewer: Jami Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/03/24 05:35 am
Title: Chapter 7

Oh awesome 😎 I love Isaac, the most memorable guest star and so good to see him again! This is brilliant like everything you write. Short and sweet . Thank you! I can't wait for the sequel

Reviewer: Angela Penn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/03/24 02:24 am
Title: Chapter 7

I love how it's just them talking at the end and then Isaac comes along with surprise spice. This is my favorite thing ever. I'm sad it ended and excited to know how the plan deviated and what happens next!

More please!

Reviewer: Gunner Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/03/24 10:42 pm
Title: Chapter 7

This is ””””I love it!

I love how plausible and genuine the plotting and story are and how real  conversations are.

Jarod really is ominous sometimes and I can feel Parker's anxieties here. To owe Jarod a favor!!! Omg!

I love Isaac. I loved him in Paper Clock. He was one of the most real characters and this series was so WOKE having a cross dresser. Jarod going after people like Donald Trump (a p*ssy grabbin rapist pedophile) was awesome. It's weird how things have changed.

 

But you haven't changed!

You do justice to this tv show and characters.

Thank you being you and keeping the characters and the spirit, heart, soul,and mind of the show alive!!

 

Congratulations 🎉🎊🎉!

Reviewer: needlepoint Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/03/24 05:47 pm
Title: Chapter 6

I've read all of this now and I'm trying to read everything of yours. I'm so thrilled by your work. It's addicting. Please update soon.

Reviewer: Jana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/02/24 10:17 pm
Title: Chapter 6

I've just now read all the chapters you've written so far and I need more. NOW!!

Reviewer: valerie_ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/01/24 01:47 am
Title: Chapter 6

This might be my favorite piece of fiction of all time. How are you? No one has heard from you this year and I'm worried 😟😳.

I hope you are ok.

Take care.

Love KM

Reviewer: Kyle McLane Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/01/24 06:43 pm
Title: Chapter 6

I can never get enough!!!! Thank you for this gift!

Reviewer: Felicia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/12/23 01:15 am
Title: Chapter 6

Every time I think you can't get possibly get better at writing you get better at writing, every chapter is more poignant and powerful than the ones before. I enjoyed this more than I can express. I just want to hug you..and if we ever meet I hope I can give you a fandomily sister from other mister hug...with your permission. I can't tell from here if you're a huggy person. I think you are. You're always so kind to me when I review and email you. Thank you for that and for writing and sharing with us. I am eternally grateful to Jacci for creating this space and to Jacci and all fanfic authors. You all keep the dream alive!! Please keep on keeping the fandom alive.

Reviewer: Leslie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/12/23 09:41 pm
Title: Chapter 6

Forgot to rate.

Reviewer: Contessa Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/12/23 06:25 am
Title: Chapter 6

Dickensian indeed. I love all of the inner dialogue as much as I love the spoken. Exquisite as always Mirage.

Reviewer: Contessa Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/12/23 06:24 am
Title: Chapter 6

Ohh I love this so much Mirage. I'm so grateful always to you for writing and sharing with us.  This does my heart so good. Take care of yourself ok??? I love you so much fellow fan-mily !!

Reviewer: Con-O Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/12/23 01:19 am
Title: Chapter 6

Oh, wow wow 😮🤯🤯 so intense, so in character. I need more. This is amazing writing as always!

I can't get enough! thanks for saving me from Xmas crap too. I need more of you!!!

Reviewer: Jami Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/12/23 02:55 am
Title: Chapter 6

I'm simpingf for this I want you to know! Uhhhhm more please!

Reviewer: Lorraina Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/12/23 01:25 am
Title: Chapter 6

Oh, woot! Mirage update dropped ””😘🙏!

First I was like Emily didn't call Parker a karen but then yaaa Parker can be a Karen and at least Emily would think so and accusing Jarod of simping is dead right and lol jarid doesn't know a Karen or what simping is 😂😂😂😂😂 lol.

I love they have this little subtle power struggle going on. Parker tried to remind him of her knife play when she dragged it down his chest and cut the ropes when she tied him up in her house...but Jarod isn't afraid of her knife or no knife.  She seemed only a little puzzled by that. I love that playfulness between them. It's so nostalgic and I thank you. I'm so grateful to you. I need more of this now.

Thank you for all the beautiful writing. This one is dear to me. Merry Christmas and happy new year.

Reviewer: Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/12/23 05:28 pm
Title: Chapter 6

Top shelf writing here mate just like always. You are a hell of story teller and author. Please add more soon!

Reviewer: richie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/12/23 01:04 am
Title: Chapter 6

This! This is gotdam brilliant. Jarod totally went all Jarod for a sec on Parker. I think I would've caved to him.  So perfect! More please?!!!

Reviewer: The Miss Parker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/12/23 11:12 pm
Title: Chapter 6

I love it so dearly and want to read more.

Reviewer: Archange Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/12/23 01:52 am
Title: Chapter 6

I was hoping Jarod would say ,by the way let's get you out of the center too.  Was ss intense as I'd hoped and imagined.

A second ’‘’’’’’😘! My heart has so much joy! Thank you for this! You're the best!

Merry holidays!!

Reviewer: Cal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/12/23 06:56 pm
Title: Chapter 6

Just in time for Christmas and a hell of pressie too. Thank you Mirage. It's always a joy to read you. You know the characters well and infuse each scene with plausibility and meaning. This got seriously intense but not in a bad way or anything. Jarod does this, begins shrinking her sometimes. I remember Keys and his "especially traumatic ones" and Parker over there tied up basically cringing with each word he said, rejecting his words. I love your continuity of plot and throwback to earlier times. I love the suprrise too. A second kiss! My god. and her wanting to get it over with! That's SO like little Miss Parker. I want more. I love the story, plot, descriptive work, and the characters of course. You nail them. I'm wishing you love and a happy rest of the year and a happy every year after to you and your people.

Reviewer: Sammi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/12/23 05:15 am
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