Just perfect 😊 Thank you 💕😘
Reviewer: lisa Signed
[Report This]Date: 11/03/23 05:09 pm
Top notch mate. This is the quality I've come to expect and always receive from you. You never disappoint. More!
Reviewer: Con-O Signed [Report This]Date: 11/03/23 03:03 am
Ooh 😲 I love Jarrod's passion when he tells Parker she couldn't see what a blind woman saw and I love he feels guilty. This is genius and I love the twists. I eagerly wait for more
Reviewer: The Miss Parker Signed [Report This]Date: 11/03/23 01:43 am
I can read this over and over. You say so much with so few words.
Reviewer: The Miss Parker Signed [Report This]Date: 11/03/23 01:40 am
Love it already. So plausible and brilliant.
Reviewer: The Miss Parker Signed [Report This]Date: 11/03/23 01:37 am
Your prose is clear and powerful and there's not much to say that hasn't already been said. You're awesome and you've got this.
Reviewer: Christoph Signed [Report This]Date: 11/03/23 12:04 am
I wondered if Mp had other plans when she showed up acting like a lawyer. Her team is already in place gathering evidence to get Jarod out and .. back to the Center I'm thinking???? Amazing. Plausible. Believeable. It's scary and people should know. You have never been afraid of darkness or controversy and that's the stuff that makes any writer a real author and a an amazing author.
Reviewer: Miss Shanon Signed [Report This]Date: 10/03/23 09:20 pm
You really know the characters and know where to put them. This is so clever and cleverly written. I want more and more!
Reviewer: Miss Shanon Signed [Report This]Date: 10/03/23 09:13 pm
Solid first chapter. Again, your work is so refreshing.
Reviewer: Miss Shanon Signed [Report This]Date: 10/03/23 09:10 pm
You are a treasure Mirage. I love your insight and unpredictableness. You are naturally talented and succinct. This story has that vibing glorious flow, plausible progression, and you really make a reader ponder about deep things.
Plus you leave me wanting more, and you're a master of striking just the right balance. More please. It's such a pleasure to read a well thought out and plotted piece.
Reviewer: Jen Signed [Report This]Date: 10/03/23 08:28 pm
Congrats on the new chapter. You yank me in with the first line and don't let go. You're one of the few authors I show up for and as an editor and publisher if I'm reading something it has to be intriguing. I don't read just anyone! Please continue. You know what you're doing and you are comfortable with language, dialogue, character and placement and the works.
Reviewer: shauna Signed [Report This]Date: 10/03/23 06:49 pm
Bravo! Super excited for the next chapter. Thank you so much for continuing to write and share. :) 💞 ðŸ˜
Reviewer: Cal Signed [Report This]Date: 10/03/23 05:03 pm
Exquisite, Mirage. You've outdone yourself again. I always enjoy the underlying camaraderie Jarod and Parker share, even when their relationship is broken and they are at their worst they still have that spark of being in it together. You capture the complexities and dynamics brilliantly. I'm already looking forward to your next instalment.
Reviewer: Michael Signed [Report This]Date: 10/03/23 05:01 am
Uh-huh love it ! Trying to be good and respect your wishes but I really want to share this on Twitter and other apps. I know how you feel tho and that you don't want the attention and I want the stories to keep coming so I'll behave . We only share you because we love you and your work so if someone does share you please don't be upset. please don't stop writing for us .
Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed [Report This]Date: 10/03/23 03:12 am
Top shelf here as always Mirage. You like continuity too I see. I remember little Jarod screaming the antcipation of pain is worse than the pain and yeah seems the theory holds still. I love the word choices and placement, the way you talk about Parker being hard, incisive, angry, all snarling but how gentle she is with Jarod... beautiful moment. She's more kind than he is sometimes. His comes out of him because he's bitter and afraid sometimes and he doesn't mean it. I think she loves him and always has. This is really beautiful, gritty, raw, noir-ish, fast paced. Please update soon.
Reviewer: richie Signed [Report This]Date: 10/03/23 12:01 am
Finally! The long awaited. I'm kidding around. I'm so thankful that you updated and you can take as long as you need. I love this story. It's so Pretendery like all of your stories are. The characters are the characters I remember from the show and the dialog is brilliant, just everything, all aspects perfect. I can't wait to read what happens next.
Reviewer: Chloe Signed [Report This]Date: 09/03/23 09:56 pm
Oooh. Oh! Jarod said what??!! Holy wows Mirage. He showed his hand immediately. So it was a rebound thing with Miuna but god... wow... she was so sweet. I know you're going to tell us how young she was and all the juicy deets? Arent you? Please. Cherries on top!
Can I say how in character they all are? Broots. Sam. Parker. Jarod. And my god LYLE!! Lyle! Wow. "not my flavor" holy amazeballs! "Too soon?"
"GI no" lol! some cops and militias be like that, playing wannabe soldier but not in shape or disciplined enough to be in the actual military ...including those who committed treason on Jan 6 at the capitol. They just cosplaying soldier bunch of sad bitches. I love this. Was that
a motorhead tune? God was never on your side? right? I googled it. You're too young to know that tune. How the hell do you know all of the good old tunes? Everything from Perry Como and Rosemary Clooney to the 80s and 90s? I understand how you know all the kids these days and LP . You actually turned me on to LP . I love all of their songs.. I don't want to misgender LP so I'm being careful. How do you know all of these songs?! Tell me!! Write more stories and please update all of the existing ones. I love it. It's like coming home from school and watching on NBC again. I love this series and your contribuations. You totally picked up the gauntlet here. MORE!!
Reviewer: Jillian Signed [Report This]Date: 09/03/23 09:31 pm
YES! Omg the way Jarod says, "can't see what even a blind woman" omg! I can see his face and hear his voice. Michael's face and voice! Squee. And I hear and see all of the characters! You really capture them, the mannerisms, all of it. I love it. Poor Miuna. I liked her. Will there be more details about her and Jarod? I hope so. Your originals are amazing. Please keep going. I love it.
Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]Date: 09/03/23 04:45 am
Please update this soon. It's so freaking intriguing and I want to know more about the woman Jarod met. I have a question for you. I'm thinking about how it is to meet the actors from this series. Are they nice? Friendly? Were you scared to meet any of them? Is Michael scary or nice? I really want to meet him. I'm really nervous about meeting him. Is he scary or anything?! Tell me what to do please....and please please update your work.
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Reviewer: Jami Signed
[Report This]Date: 20/02/23 06:23 pm
Please update!
Author's Response:
Done. Thanks.
Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]Date: 04/02/23 04:46 pm
I love how much this feels like I'm watching an episode of the pretender and how all of your stories are. like continuations that are plausible and brillianly written. A new piece from you is wonderful and always welcome.
Reviewer: Miss Sofia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 28/03/22 05:30 am
So many feels here. Miss P is the free defense attorney provided for him?!! Head=explodes. They go back and forth like they do on the series so many times and this is so reminiscent of so many arguments. The Centre for once couldn't get ahead of it by killing a dozen people and in this scenario that's plausible. He's already on the news. Does this mean Rachel will come into play? That can get messy, but a good mess. A catfight? I think Parker will win. Miss P is totally bad ass here and she's not wrong. The Centre has never wanted to kill Jarod. He has some value. I'm fascinated by this. I want more now. Make it so please.
Author's Response:
No, he's not on the news. His missing love interest is. The "today you're the someone" remark refers to the police who all blame Jarod, and the situation in general. I hope Rachel isn't involved. No, no catfights. Parker would never have to fight for Jarod's attention. She isn't really his attorney either. The update should provide some clarity. I hope. If not, perhaps the next one will. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Angela Penn Signed [Report This]Date: 26/01/22 12:51 am
Oh woot you've been busy. Yay!!! I don't know if Jarod can get out of this one. He's not guilty, is he? I know he can snap, but dammmn. Georgia. He seems so screwed. Hell of a job with this. You really set the scene and it's like being there.
Reviewer: Angela Penn Signed [Report This]Date: 26/01/22 12:47 am
The chapters are so concise and well written. It is over so quickly and I'm left aching for more. I hope Parker will help him. I want a happy ending. I hope she can get the charges dropped or steal him from the police. Can they be together please?
Author's Response:
"Steal him from the police" was her plan all along, I think.
Wait. You want Parker and Jarod to be together? Together inside the Centre, you mean? With Parker in charge? And Jarod running simulations? Parker with a whip? Jarod on his knees? Or-- like, together together doing adult stuff in bed?
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Sela Signed [Report This]Date: 25/01/22 10:48 pm
