Oh💕 Parker arrives with snark to spare and she's telling the truth..Jarod can be a drama queen sometimes.
Reviewer: Monica Signed
[Report This]Date: 29/03/23 09:56 pm
Those good ol boy deputies in small southern regions hate the ACLU. Miss Parker is all snark here and Jarod is all snark too. I love how they bicker and there's usually no intention to actually hurt the other. It's just the way they cope, them playing their roles. The characters are the characters. I'm going to tell you something right now and it's that you're the only person who writes them the way they were during the tv series. I don't want to read a book where I can't recognize my characters from tv. I want them to be the way they're supposed to be. You keep them alive. I'm grateful to you for that. You also write exquisitely and do grammar well but that's icing on a cake that already tastes perfect without any icing.
Reviewer: d_el1 Signed [Report This]Date: 22/03/23 02:09 am
Miss Parker makes an appearance.. and what a hell of an appearance it is. She's perfect, huh! She write them so well. Too well maybe? You really have a knack for characterisations, setting up the scene, and maintaining my excitement all throughout the story. Needless to say I want more. Now. Write young lady!
Reviewer: Monica_Bitch Signed [Report This]Date: 14/03/23 08:37 pm
Gonna repeat myself here but I love the crime suspense drama and you combine it with The,Pretender spectacularly.
Reviewer: Jake Signed [Report This]Date: 13/03/23 12:38 am
woot! The characters are always so wonderfully fleshed out when you write them including your originals. Big applause for you. I just want more and more and more forever ♾ï¸
Reviewer: needlepoint Signed [Report This]Date: 12/03/23 12:44 am
I can read this over and over. You say so much with so few words.
Reviewer: The Miss Parker Signed [Report This]Date: 11/03/23 01:40 am
You really know the characters and know where to put them. This is so clever and cleverly written. I want more and more!
Reviewer: Miss Shanon Signed [Report This]Date: 10/03/23 09:13 pm
Please update this soon. It's so freaking intriguing and I want to know more about the woman Jarod met. I have a question for you. I'm thinking about how it is to meet the actors from this series. Are they nice? Friendly? Were you scared to meet any of them? Is Michael scary or nice? I really want to meet him. I'm really nervous about meeting him. Is he scary or anything?! Tell me what to do please....and please please update your work.
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Reviewer: Jami Signed
[Report This]Date: 20/02/23 06:23 pm
Please update!
Author's Response:
Done. Thanks.
Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]Date: 04/02/23 04:46 pm
So many feels here. Miss P is the free defense attorney provided for him?!! Head=explodes. They go back and forth like they do on the series so many times and this is so reminiscent of so many arguments. The Centre for once couldn't get ahead of it by killing a dozen people and in this scenario that's plausible. He's already on the news. Does this mean Rachel will come into play? That can get messy, but a good mess. A catfight? I think Parker will win. Miss P is totally bad ass here and she's not wrong. The Centre has never wanted to kill Jarod. He has some value. I'm fascinated by this. I want more now. Make it so please.
Author's Response:
No, he's not on the news. His missing love interest is. The "today you're the someone" remark refers to the police who all blame Jarod, and the situation in general. I hope Rachel isn't involved. No, no catfights. Parker would never have to fight for Jarod's attention. She isn't really his attorney either. The update should provide some clarity. I hope. If not, perhaps the next one will. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Angela Penn Signed [Report This]Date: 26/01/22 12:51 am
The chapters are so concise and well written. It is over so quickly and I'm left aching for more. I hope Parker will help him. I want a happy ending. I hope she can get the charges dropped or steal him from the police. Can they be together please?
Author's Response:
"Steal him from the police" was her plan all along, I think.
Wait. You want Parker and Jarod to be together? Together inside the Centre, you mean? With Parker in charge? And Jarod running simulations? Parker with a whip? Jarod on his knees? Or-- like, together together doing adult stuff in bed?
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Sela Signed [Report This]Date: 25/01/22 10:48 pm
Please don't stop here. I love the criminal suspense drama and I love Pretender. This is winning combination.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Jake.
Reviewer: Jake Signed [Report This]Date: 18/01/22 11:09 pm
Miss Parker shines here. I wasn't expecting two chapters in addition to all of the other stories you are writing at the moment, not to mention the short short you recently gave us that I will be reviewing next. Brilliant!
Author's Response:
Hi, Daniel, thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Daniel P Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/01/22 10:31 pm
Parker is spectacular inn't she? You write her better than anyone. I know she's helping herself here because it's her job to capture Jarod but it's still nice that she's trying to help him too. I know she walks a crooked line. Your descriptive work is fabulous too. A definite ten rating.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, Shauna. Parker does walk a crooked line.
Reviewer: shauna Signed [Report This]Date: 14/01/22 05:16 am
LOVE that Miss Parker comes in like a freaking wrecking ball. This has a noir flavor but not too much. You really write these characters exceptionally well and your story telling ability is-- beyond perfect. I want more.
Author's Response:
Aw, thanks, Xena.
Reviewer: Xena Signed [Report This]Date: 14/01/22 04:55 am
Wows! Just read both chapters and whoa like a train they go by so fast and now I crave more and I know your little fingers are busy typing more right now... right? Right? Say yes.
Author's Response:
Thank you, Felicia.
Reviewer: Felicia Signed [Report This]Date: 12/01/22 09:39 pm
2 chapters? Now that's something wonderful. You do treat us well and gift us with multiple chapters sometimes and I am so appreciative right now. My heart is filled by the appearance of Miss Parker as I remember her. You always get it right and I don't know how that's possible. You haven't made a deal with satan? Or are you a witch? Do tell. Most importantly write more for us.
Author's Response:
Nope. No crossroads deal for me. I'd be demanding a refund if I had. It's only fanfic. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Ricky Signed [Report This]Date: 10/01/22 09:03 pm
I love the wit, intelligence, and excitement you pack into each story. The pages are already flying so to speak. I eagerly await future chapters!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the rather generous review, Sammi.
Reviewer: Sammi Signed [Report This]Date: 07/01/22 12:26 am
...and there you go besting yourself. I *thought* the first chapter was amazing... the second chapter is even more amazing. Miss Parker in the house!
Author's Response:
Thanks, Joni.
Reviewer: Joni Signed [Report This]Date: 05/01/22 03:01 am
Stunning second chapter. I was almost afraid that it was Miss Parker that was missing even though it was pretty clear it was a different pair of blue eyes. This made me so relieved. Miss Parker is on her game here. Strong but not overdone or pretentious. I love it. Quite the mystery-suspence crime thriller in play here. I hope you'll update soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and the much-too generous review.
Reviewer: Con-O Signed [Report This]Date: 05/01/22 12:49 am
Miss Parker coming in completely in control. I love that Jarod and other men support her story arc in your stories and not the other way. We often see women only empowering the men but she's clearly here to retrieve Jarod for her own benefit and I love that she's attorney and sent by the ACLU. I love that Jarod donates stolen Centre money to the ACLU. I love the ACLU if ya didn't know. I can't imagine how this will move forward but you haven't ever let me down and I don't think you'll start now. I also want to say how much I love that Jarod finally got in a mess he couldn't get himself out of and with the breaking news and social media there would be no easy way out this time. I think, as in your Happenstance masterpiece that other agencies would also want him when they realize he's worked for and with them and impersonated them in the past. I hope you will continue this. I know you have many that seem or seem to me are close to being finished and as sad as I am to see them end I always want more. Happy new year.
Author's Response:
Who doesn't love the ACLU? Thank you for reading and reviewing, Amelia.
Reviewer: Amelia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 31/12/21 09:47 pm
So now I'm in jail. Mirage Mirage Mirage why don't you like me? Why do you hate me? I'm the good guy. The GOOD guy. I have to be innocent. I'm innocent. I've always been innocent. You write amazingly well and your writing voice is powerful and you are probably my favorite but I am good and you need to remember that. I only removed one person's kidney without their consent and... ok at least I didn't eat the kidney like Lyle would do because he is a really bad person. You have to like me. I'm not completely good but at least I'm not Lyle. Update soon please.
Author's Response:
Ah, I see. You're doing the Jarod roleplaying thing. I had a brief what the fuc moment, which is ridiculous, really, because I should be accustomed to this by now. Anyway, Jarod, it was nice of you to fast forward ahead and confess that you aren't good. You only steal kidneys. You don't eat them. Thanks for clarifying, J.
On a serious note, thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Jarod the pretender Anonymous [Report This]Date: 29/12/21 10:58 pm
"Hell's intestines" lol! Miss Parker is here with her super snark and bark and I love it. She is super on point and I know how cops are definitely not Andy in Mayberry. You are truly exceptional with characterisations and character placement...and dialogue, transitions...you're just good at every aspect of this.You deliver the professional goods and know how to get my attention and keep it. I love that Miss Parker is there to help Jarod-not really help him-help herself. The chapters are so short so I'm thrilled to tears that you posted two for us. Thank you to the moon and back Mirage.
Reviewer: Jen Signed [Report This]Date: 29/12/21 10:31 pm
2 chapters whoa. I love this new and fresh direction and my GOD the characters are perfect and as they are. Seriously. I love this. The chapters are too short but understandable. You leave me craving more.
Reviewer: Christoph Signed [Report This]Date: 29/12/21 07:16 pm
More please?
Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]Date: 28/12/21 02:59 am
