Lorraina meant literally he wiggles his ears ...not a euphemism but yeah I get the apprehensiveness to comment on him. I laughed out loud for real when I read your response to her. Not even gonna ask what you thought that could have been a euphemism for??!!! take care again and love 😘
Reviewer: Jake Signed
[Report This]Date: 18/04/24 07:10 am
Hi, I've been thinking about you and your SO. it's been a while since we've heard from you? I hope you and S.O. are well. Really want to read more from you. Take care.
Author's Response:
Significant Person is doing, for the most part, the same. Bad days, slightly better days. It's life. Take care of yourself, Jen. Thank you.
Reviewer: Jen Signed [Report This]Date: 30/10/23 02:49 am
please update soon
Author's Response:
Done.
Reviewer: Con-O Signed [Report This]Date: 10/08/23 08:40 pm
*command of the language .
I saw that right after I clicked submit that I spelled command comman... ffferk.
Reviewer: Monica_Bitch Signed [Report This]Date: 18/05/23 02:50 pm
It keeps better and better and I keep needing more and more. Please feed this addiction.
Reviewer: April L Signed [Report This]Date: 18/05/23 02:34 am
WOOT! My namesake and Jarod are throwing the stabby words at each other, both are scared, Parker's got some guilt, Jarod feels she's betraying him. Those kids! They're all in character! Lordt!
I was afraid you were going have her help him escape, or they were gong to escape together, or he was going to escape alone. They can do any of those later but there's gotta be some Centre creaminess mixed into the yummy blend of dark roasted darkness you're brewing for us. Thank you for doing the hard thing.
I was worried that you had left us for another fandom. Please don't leave us. Write more. Update everything. I could read you all the time 22/7. I love this tv series and you keep it alive. Don't ever stop. I'm forever grateful to you.
Reviewer: The Miss Parker Signed [Report This]Date: 11/05/23 10:31 pm
Blue flickering lights! Jarod's in trouble now. Brilliant descriptions and plotting.
Reviewer: Monica Signed [Report This]Date: 29/03/23 09:52 pm
I'm reading from the beginning again probably for the eight time. It never gets old. Your prose is delightful, lyrical, and not a word is wasted. You're a wordsmith and a rockstar. I love this plot and can't get enough.
Reviewer: d_el1 Signed [Report This]Date: 22/03/23 02:02 am
I'm so here for this right now. This could easily be an episode of The Pretender right now. Because we don't have this series on tv I appreciate even more that you share your natural gifts with us. Thank you. The dream doesn't die if we keep it alive.
Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed [Report This]Date: 16/03/23 01:40 am
Ohh, I wasn't expecting something like this from you. It's plausible and fast paced. He really should have been handcuffed more on the series and had these brushes with cops.
Reviewer: Monica_Bitch Signed [Report This]Date: 14/03/23 08:33 pm
Fabulous as always. There's nothing I can say that hasn't been said. Please keep going.
Reviewer: Jeremy Signed [Report This]Date: 13/03/23 11:59 pm
Gripping first chapter.
Reviewer: Jake Signed [Report This]Date: 13/03/23 12:35 am
Oh, I have 3 chapters to catch up. This first one really gripped me. Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: needlepoint Signed [Report This]Date: 12/03/23 12:41 am
Love it already. So plausible and brilliant.
Reviewer: The Miss Parker Signed [Report This]Date: 11/03/23 01:37 am
Solid first chapter. Again, your work is so refreshing.
Reviewer: Miss Shanon Signed [Report This]Date: 10/03/23 09:10 pm
Oooh. Oh! Jarod said what??!! Holy wows Mirage. He showed his hand immediately. So it was a rebound thing with Miuna but god... wow... she was so sweet. I know you're going to tell us how young she was and all the juicy deets? Arent you? Please. Cherries on top!
Can I say how in character they all are? Broots. Sam. Parker. Jarod. And my god LYLE!! Lyle! Wow. "not my flavor" holy amazeballs! "Too soon?"
"GI no" lol! some cops and militias be like that, playing wannabe soldier but not in shape or disciplined enough to be in the actual military ...including those who committed treason on Jan 6 at the capitol. They just cosplaying soldier bunch of sad bitches. I love this. Was that
a motorhead tune? God was never on your side? right? I googled it. You're too young to know that tune. How the hell do you know all of the good old tunes? Everything from Perry Como and Rosemary Clooney to the 80s and 90s? I understand how you know all the kids these days and LP . You actually turned me on to LP . I love all of their songs.. I don't want to misgender LP so I'm being careful. How do you know all of these songs?! Tell me!! Write more stories and please update all of the existing ones. I love it. It's like coming home from school and watching on NBC again. I love this series and your contribuations. You totally picked up the gauntlet here. MORE!!
Reviewer: Jillian Signed [Report This]Date: 09/03/23 09:31 pm
I love how much this feels like I'm watching an episode of the pretender and how all of your stories are. like continuations that are plausible and brillianly written. A new piece from you is wonderful and always welcome.
Reviewer: Miss Sofia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 28/03/22 05:30 am
Oh woot you've been busy. Yay!!! I don't know if Jarod can get out of this one. He's not guilty, is he? I know he can snap, but dammmn. Georgia. He seems so screwed. Hell of a job with this. You really set the scene and it's like being there.
Reviewer: Angela Penn Signed [Report This]Date: 26/01/22 12:47 am
This. Oh no Jarod is in trouble now. The way the agencies all communicate now he can't hide from this.
Reviewer: Sela Signed [Report This]Date: 25/01/22 10:45 pm
Top notch! You're a powerhouse take-no-prisoners author with a voice I can't ignore, and this story, like all of your stories, is a compelling one. You also have command of the story and the literary know-how and skill required to complete your stories and I appreciate that.
Reviewer: Daniel P Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/01/22 10:29 pm
Ooooh. Powerful. You know how to yank the reader in immediately. The first sentence makes me want to read more. Another thing is you have a really great mind's eye for illustrating the words with words. What I mean is that I read you and the scene plays out like a movie in my head for me. I don't see that much in fanfic. I don't see it much in books either. I was so absorbed in the story that I almost forgot to even notice how well the characters are fleshed out and recognizable. I don't know if you climbed inside Jarod and Parker's mind or if they climbed inside yours. I think the characters have decided to live with you. It's so wild. Some of your writing has scared me and I hope that doesn't offend you or anything. Having that sweet stage front ticket can be a blessing but when things get dark in your stories it can get scary and uncomfortable, like when I went to see the Dangerous Liasions play and our very own Michael T. Weiss played that skeevy predator. I should have sat way in the back. I was so flushed in the face that I feared I was the one people were watching. I hope the actors don't read these reviews! I will die of embarassment. I'm grateful you are writing for the fandom, for this webpage, that The Pretender is still alive and well at least in one small space in the world. Please don't let it die. It's all some of us have.
Reviewer: lisa Signed [Report This]Date: 14/01/22 09:16 pm
Gripping first chapter. I'm impressed and can't wait to see where you're taking us.
Reviewer: shauna Signed [Report This]Date: 14/01/22 05:14 am
I am blindsided by this. Wow! Amazing.
Reviewer: Xena Signed [Report This]Date: 14/01/22 04:53 am
Just noticed that some people are reviewing each chapter separately? I didn't know. I love them both.
Reviewer: Felicia Signed [Report This]Date: 12/01/22 09:40 pm
Ahhhh. You're the one I always come back to. Why, young lady? Why do I always get pulled back in? It's because you capture the dynamics of all the characters so well and write so profoundly and brilliantly. I can't give you up. You've got that something that great authors have and it's rare and precious and I feel fortunate that you chose to channel your natural talents through this fandom even though this fandom consists of maybe a couple hundred people, most who are in their sixties by now! I see the younger kids on twitter talking about you and the fandom so you are defnitely doing something right to make this more than just a nostalgia thing. I'm serious. You're talented.
You seem to not hate Jarod at all. I think I used to believe you hated him and that you were't fond of Michael T Weiss either but now I think I confused you with Miss Parker. I get the not fangirling thing. I don't expect you to fawn. I'm just glad there's no hate. I know you said it in review answers that you don't hate anyone but... that's something people say and don't mean. I think the fact that you don't use emojis can be offputting and people don't know what your tone is and think you're being sarcastic. I noticed in reviews that I'm not the only person realizing that you're just normal and that because you don't fawn it doesn't mean that you hate. You said something like that before, like why does it have to be one of the other. Sorry for going maybe off topic but it's not really off topic if he's the chacaracter and actorr. Love your writing and that you continue to share with us
Reviewer: Ricky Signed [Report This]Date: 10/01/22 09:00 pm
