oh my god. I wasn't expecting Jarod to actually stay in the Centre for a while. I'm feeling big sympathy feels for Miss Parker. She doesn't catch a break.
Centre: Jarod escaped, bring him back.
MP: And then I can leave?
Centre: Don't see why not.
*MP brings Jarod back*
Centre: We lied.
I never thought they'd really let her go.
Just hope they aren't gonna try an old fashioned impregnation now that they have Jarod and MP back in the same building. Could just see the Centre saying: they're here, and they're fertile, let's do it.
More please. I love the curve ball you just tossed. You're damn amazing!
Reviewer: Thara Nicole Signed
[Report This]Date: 25/04/24 08:58 pm
Top shelf all the way! You are a brilliant story teller and author. Thank you.
Reviewer: Jeremy Signed [Report This]Date: 23/04/24 10:01 pm
Top shelf all the way! You are a brilliant story teller and author. Thank you.
Reviewer: Jeremy Signed [Report This]Date: 23/04/24 10:01 pm
Your ability to transport me into the scene slays!
Lyle is exquisite. Your characterisations are always exquisite and spot on.
I need more .
NOW
Reviewer: Jami Signed [Report This]Date: 23/04/24 08:16 pm
Bravo! Bravo!
I hear often about how brillantly you write Jarod and Miss Parker. Let me say that I'm astounded by how on-the-nose Lyle also is. Masterfully done, Mirage.
Your voice is powerful and your writing is stunning. Your prose is rich and moving. You leave me fascinated and in awe.
Thank you. More please? I'm more intringued than I can express.
Until next time, Mirage...
Ciao!!
Reviewer: Michael Signed [Report This]Date: 23/04/24 02:41 am
Oh, snap, I love this. You put me in the scene and you make me feel like I'm coming home from school and waiting for an episode and ... bliss! I'm just blissing out here.
Thank you so much for everything. Being here. I know you have things going on in your life and you're busy. You still find the time to give us a thousand words when you can. It's so worth waiting for. Thank you.
Reviewer: Revenant Signed [Report This]Date: 22/04/24 11:01 pm
Hitting me right in the Pretender feelz Mirage.I love this.
You haven't responded to my emails or my other reviews about that picture I shared. I want to know where that is located. Thanks.
Reviewer: Nooms Signed [Report This]Date: 22/04/24 09:22 pm
omg I don't usually read the other reviews but my mobile scrolled cis someone nudged me at airport Lorraina is cray. I know why you'd think ear wiggling is an euphemism for something else!!!
Lorraina is like "why a euphemism?"
Also Lorraine is like "I am dirty and get all over him and objectify him and love euphemisms"
I don't know much about the actual actors either. I knew about the ear wiggly thing because IMDb or Wikipedia or something but you can't be expected to know everything about the actors.
I appreciate that you don't objectify him and that you don't obsess over actors. It's so pathetic of fans to want to screw actors they don't even know. I'm glad you're not reeking of that desperation
I love your writing and story telling skills too. more please! You're amazing 🤩😻🤩🤩🤩.
Reviewer: Con-O Signed [Report This]Date: 22/04/24 02:38 am
Thank you for this. I have a feeling Parker is about to have her hands full....of Jarod.
I don't envy her or Jarod. You write beautifully, leaving me always in awe.
I also want to thank you for responding to my email. I understand you're compartmentalizing and really just glad you're coping ok and caring for yourself while caretaking for your significant person
You say you don't need anything but if you ever do I'm here. The offer always stands.
Take care of yourself and update when you can. ’–’–’–
[Report This]Date: 20/04/24 09:45 pm
awesome sauce!! you are amazing ’– 🤩 this is so stunning and brings the old pretender feels back again...happens a lot when I read you. This makes me feel like watching an episode and I'm in the episode and another new episode is coming soon ... I'm so grateful..crying and laughing here. thank you.. bless you!
Reviewer: Miss Parkere Signed [Report This]Date: 20/04/24 04:22 pm
Uhhh huh!! This is amazing 😍 🤩 😍 🤩 🤩 🤩 🤩!!
ohhhh I can't get enough!!
no we I said he wiggles his ears I meant wiggles his ears...what ever did u think I meant??????!!!!!
so I'm loling what did you think? Ok yes I'm dirty woman and will do anything with anyone and you know I got all over him when I met him but I did mean just wiggle ears...wiggling nothing else and I'm thinking cold dick episodes now with Mr wiggles?!!!!!! I cannot stop the laughter.
I will never be stop the objectiveify him.. and he is sexy. You will fall in love with him eventually. I'm sorry. I try to do the better. sorry I am so sorry ”....please don't block me or anything.
Reviewer: Lorraina Signed [Report This]Date: 20/04/24 05:23 am
I need more now. please!!
Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]Date: 20/04/24 03:43 am
Girl, let me thank you for writing and sharing with us. I love The Pretender and this, oh my god THIS THIS THIS!
You have the old feelings all stirred up the way it used to be when I watched The Pretender when I was younger. I have that the same feeling now. You have touched me heart and soul. S
ometimes you also bitch slap my mind a little bit but The Pretender did that when I watched, too. So much trauma sometimes. You have done it.
You do it. You do it again and again and again. I don't know how you're able to write fresh stories and keep it you know, exciting this way. It's like THe Pretender never even ended.
Thank you for that. You nail the characters down perfectly and you're a helluva story teller. I love the descriptiions, not too descriptive that we get bogged down in details. You're amazing.
You're magic!
Thank you so much.
"Jarod IS your job." Wow. Lyle. Just so much of the wow!
So excited for more!
Reviewer: Jillian Signed [Report This]Date: 19/04/24 05:28 pm
Top shelf, mate. Hell of a ride already and action packed! The characters are in top form, the transitions rock, the descriptions all place me dead center CENTRE of the story so I can watch it all unfold up close. Tight chapters, too. You yank me in and don't let go until the last word.
Bloody brilliant.
Reviewer: King Of Pain Signed [Report This]Date: 19/04/24 01:23 am
Magnifique!
Merci merci merci!
Reviewer: Archange Signed [Report This]Date: 19/04/24 12:39 am
This gets more and more exciting with each chapter. More please?
Reviewer: Gem Signed [Report This]Date: 18/04/24 09:37 pm
"Jarod IS your job."
I mean... damn. Where's the lie tho? Lyle ain't lyin'. So Miss Parker of her to dump Jarod in the Centre and avoid him. She does deserve some peace from Jarod tho. No 3 AM calls, no showing up at the bank adulting day, no stalking her in graveyards. I don't blame her. I see all of the perspectives, same as you. You always blow me away doll. Keep going!
Oh... and Jarod killed that bastard? I thought he might while chisling away that Tattoo. One wrong tap and heart gets pierced. I love it. GI NO deserved to die.
Parker seems troubled by that too tho. She does worry about things like that, Jarod being pushed too far, snapping. Oh delicious. This is a juicy one Mirage. I love it.
[Report This]Date: 18/04/24 09:03 pm
Good God Miss Parker in her splendor and glory!! Snap!
You capture the characters and nuances perfectly. Pretender Perfect!
I can't wait to see how she finally interacts with captured Jarod. What is Sydney going to do?
It's just like a patriarchal institution to erect a statue of the captured and not even recognize Parker the woman who captured him.
I'm a little afraid of where this might go, and super excited 😆!
🦋🦋 🦋 butterflies in my chest and stomach!! More please!
Reviewer: Jen Signed [Report This]Date: 18/04/24 05:36 pm
Ooh I love it. Jarod is back! This is so Pretendery with the Centre taking main stage like it did on the series so often.
This is more Centre centric I think than your other works, and I love it.. 😉 😁 😁 😁 😁
More more more..ASSet lol. The sibling rivalry is on again!
Reviewer: Chloe Signed [Report This]Date: 18/04/24 03:44 pm
Lorraina meant literally he wiggles his ears ...not a euphemism but yeah I get the apprehensiveness to comment on him. I laughed out loud for real when I read your response to her. Not even gonna ask what you thought that could have been a euphemism for??!!! take care again and love 😘
Reviewer: Jake Signed [Report This]Date: 18/04/24 07:10 am
Top notch mate! Your descriptive work is brilliant. The Centre aspect has always been fascinating and you provide the perfect amount of backstory to catch us up on the Adama's replacement.
Anithet stroke of genius was the statue. Jarod being treated well and like an asset instead of a slave is ...that should be obvious to any corporation that believes employees are assets! I love that. The pat on the back to help employees fall to their death was spot on too. I love Parker's emphasis on ass when talking about Jarod being an asset lol.
I know they will control Jarod some way. I love that Jarod will be attending a celebration with Parker having no choice but to be present.
She is feeling awful and I can imagine..Sh was going to set him free until Lyle showed if I'm not mistaken.
The bickering between siblings, the threats, ahhh it's like watching an episode of the pretender. That really is the spirit....and soul and heart of the pretender you're writing. You're brilliant mate. Thank you for this. Please continue. Much love and gratitude .
[Report This]Date: 18/04/24 07:05 am
Oh my god I want more and more. please please please update all of your FICS NOW. I'm dying here.
Oh, did you know that Michael T. Weiss can wiggle his ears?
You should know that if you don't already. He's so cute. You still don't have the selfie do you? You HAVE to do a selfie with Michael and get all close and stuff. You have to show us the SELFIE with him! Please. We'll know who you are then! I want to know more about you...and a pic of him is ALWAYS a wondreful amazing freaking thing. He's beautiful.
You also have to write more for us NOW!
I freaking love your writing. I see him and all of the c haraaracters when you wirte! It's magical baby!!!!!
Author's Response:
Reviewer: Lorraina Signed
[Report This]Date: 29/03/24 03:52 am
Hi, I've been thinking about you and your SO. it's been a while since we've heard from you? I hope you and S.O. are well. Really want to read more from you. Take care.
Author's Response:
Significant Person is doing, for the most part, the same. Bad days, slightly better days. It's life. Take care of yourself, Jen. Thank you.
Reviewer: Jen Signed [Report This]Date: 30/10/23 02:49 am
Still waiting for a update to this or any of your works. Are you ok? I hope you are ok..
Take care.
Ciao!!
Author's Response:
I'm o k.
Thanks.
Reviewer: Michael Signed [Report This]Date: 15/10/23 03:34 am
The third rereading... and this is still fresh and amazing.
How are you? Please check in with someone.. anyone. I'm reading all of your review responses looking for you to respond to anyone who has asked so I will read and know that you're ok. Kind of freaked me out that you're getting wisdom teeth out ..you must be really young..I guess young people write too it's just some content is troubling and to write it while so young...it makes me worry that you write from personal experience. 😢 I hope the jaw issue is fixed without any other procedures...did you hurt it or just born with it?
I'm freaking and worried.
Take care of yourself sweet friend. I miss you.
Author's Response:
I miss you, too.
Oh, that. I'm not that young, and the content isn't from personal experience. I'm almost certain that no real events regarding me have slipped into the scribblings. Some writers probably do write therapeutically, and that's okay, that's wonderful really. It's good to get it out probably. That isn't me, however.
I wasn't born with the jaw issue. The egg donor hurt my jaw when I was a child.
Don't worry please. Just keep being your incredibly kind self.
Take care of you, too.
Reviewer: shauna Signed [Report This]Date: 07/10/23 05:18 pm
