Oh oooh Mirage I'm thrilled that you're here. I love this new story and I hope you will write more. So much here to love. Thank you for writing and for sharing.Reviewer: Mlle Parker Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/04/18 10:14 pm
I came on here because I was bored on the train. I didn't imagine you would update so quickly. I should not be surprised. You are quite prolific.
This chapter was both hilarious and sad. I really do enjoy how you write the charectors of Jarod and Miss Parker.
Speaking of, who in their right (or wrong) mind would cheat on her!!!??!??
Thanks as always for writing and updating your myriad of stories on here.Reviewer: twisted Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 30/03/18 05:51 pm
I remember how she made of the "ho-down" people in Lyle's old school but now here she is ... that was a stroke of genius Mirage. There always ways a little... or actually aLOT of hypocrisy in Parker and that makes this all the more plausible but her reasons aren't bad, even if she is a little bit bad and a hypocrite. When people have children things change and people will do things they never thought they'd do to keep those children safe ...just ask American schools having "drills" and "buckets of rocks" now to learn how not to be shot in school OMG.
What is telling and I do love it when Parker shows her true feelings is the bitterness and pain when she tells Jarod that Ethan was the only family she'd had then. She was really hurt by that..
I reread this looking for some forshadowing to guess your next move but honestly I have no idea where you're going with this. I'm with you on the ride though. I want more so much right now. Oh please hurry and write. Love this!Reviewer: Gunner Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/03/18 05:47 pm
Hooray! I was wondering if you would give us a new story now that you've finished Who will guard the guards? and yes..so thrilled about this I can barely stand it!! Thank you. It's so perfect. Way short chapters though. I read through both chapter and kept refreshing hoping you'd add more. Not yet tho. I so can't wait. More please?Reviewer: Gunner Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/03/18 05:41 pm
Ohhhhhh. Miss Parker cheated on by a hubby? I hope she really will be kicking Greg out. I hope Jarod will be moving in. lol. Can't help it. I'm shippery even though you're not. Love this. So good to see you back here again. Wow. I'm stoked af! Thank you.Reviewer: Miss Parkere Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/03/18 11:52 pm
Oh, beautiful and eloquent prose. It kills me. I love it. So many updates and they are all so professionally styled! I keep thinking what we did to deserve this and then I remember I haven't shared you on twitter or facebook for a little while.... is that it? You will write for us if we DON'T share you? That's not fair. We want to share so everyone will get to read you. It's like ice cream..when it's good we want to give everyone a taste. I'll try not to be too overly enthusiastic but I love you and I love this and I need more. Only complaint is the chapters are so short. It proves that wonderful small things can come in small little packages...but I'd like longer chapters. "You thought I was going to kill him?" Jarod: "admit it you kinda want to now" lol Love it. Keep going please.Reviewer: Christoph Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/03/18 03:44 am
Yikes. I have sympathy for Parker here but I also don't fault Jarod for the heavier hand. His intentions were clear and they were good intentions. I didn't think you hated him. Not too much anyway. MP has wrapped herself in false security and relaxed maybe too much? With Thomas she struggled to personify both the Ice Queen image and the loving girlfriend when Thomas and her family all dined. It's easy to play one role with one group of people and wear a different mask around a whole different group but when both groups are in the same room we become torn I think. She's made this new life and can barely cope when confronted with the old one and that's plausible and even expected. It's nice to see her reveal even more vulnerability and her reaction to the affair contained comedic elements which made it all the more entertaining. You contine to blow me away. I eagerly await the next chapter. Until next time Mirage...Reviewer: Michael Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27/03/18 07:13 pm
Brilliant. I'm not surprised that you're able to write so many high qualities stories at once. I've come to expect this level of professionalism from you and I hope you never change a thing about yourself. The writing, plot, dialouge, and descriptive work are stunning. Something particularly intriguing is that Jarod's rethinking his strategy with her, ie advising her to breathe, trying to correct his error, etc. Hehee. Excellent Mirage.
Until next time...
Reviewer: Michael Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27/03/18 06:59 pm
Woot. I thought Jarod was dead! You had me going. Ohhhh but Sydney and Jarod's clone are. :( Love how she embraced him thinking he was the clone but then couldn't wait to get out of his grasp when she learned it was Jarod. Oohhhh Mirage. I love you. Thank you for this new story. And ditto on winter. Winter needs to gtf on already. More please?Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/03/18 09:01 pm
New Mirage story yes please! You just perfectly described winter this year in the first paragraph. He's a defiant old bugger and needs to go and stay gone. Just when I think spring has sprung bloody winter is like 'not so fast' lol. OK another childhood memory. I used to jump from my moving bike too. I love this story. I love that Jarod isn't dead and that Parker has a family. Parker's reaction was spot on. She only loves me when I'm dead. lol. Poor Jarod. Why do I feel that this sweet beginning is about to turn ugly. How ever this story goes I'm in for the ride.Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/03/18 07:45 pm
A new story from Mirage! Now that's worth a late night visit to this site! Thanks for this! Always a pleasure to read one of your stories. Looking forward to what comes next.
Thank you, twisted, for reading and reviewing. I intend to post another chapter tomorrow.Reviewer: twisted Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/03/18 02:06 am