Whoa! I freaking love this. You've always been an exceptional author but you've totally outdone yourself too this time. More please?
Reviewer: Jennifer Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 12/08/19 02:51 am
Jarod thinking (in bold? I think I'm right?) that Parker is trying to silence the voices in her head...lol. OMG. I'm thinking he's right about that. Or that she can't endure his voice while having sex with him.. because she would probably be trying to concentrate on the act and he won't let her detach from the act with him... which goes back to earlier in this chapter where she's thinking those can be anyone's hands.... he must know what is in her mind. That must be terrifying for her. You always make me think so much about these characters and oh.hh he is so gentle with her... but she wasn't gentle with her or him and almost broke him. I like that she has all of the power including the power to break his certain body part ;) and I need more. What are they going to do now? Have more sex I hope. It's way overdue. More please!
Reviewer: Gunner Signed [Report This]Date: 12/08/19 12:32 am
Love it and want more. I've never seen anyone write them so well!! More? Please?
Reviewer: Delana Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/08/19 11:38 pm
Oh Gods!
I'm picking my jaw up over here. The writing, the dialog, the characterisations are all perfect. Everything is perfect. And then you go and add stellar sex to that, rounding this chapter out expertly. Jarod's gone pro lover. You are a pro writer. I need more! I'm begging for more. Jarod and Miss P are begging for more. Make it happen Mirage. I love your writing.
Reviewer: Jade Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/08/19 10:18 pm
More please? OMG! So hot. Perfectly written. I love that they are how they were on the tv. Thank you so freaking much!
Reviewer: Michelle Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/08/19 02:39 am
Hands over face. Yess Parker is so guilty of doing it. You capture them brilliantly always Mirage and leave me craving more. I got so aroused reading this. When Jarod said that about finding her interest in what gets him off flattering and.. ooh. HOT. He can be such a SEXY handful. More please?
Reviewer: Chloe Signed [Report This]Date: 10/08/19 12:05 am
This is the hottest thing I've ever read. I love Forces Of Nature and Circles of Hell because Jarod always seemed so dark and everyone talks about the dark scenes but you prove again and again that you write consensual sex exceptionally wonderful too. I've never gotten so hot from reading erotic scenes before. I had to grab my bf before reviewing know what I mean??! ;-) It was also meaningful because of the way Jarod was with her and the revelations to each other. Uhhh! I want MORE! I want it now. You always keep me coming back... and you keep me coming.:-)
Reviewer: Karen Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/08/19 08:15 pm
Exquisite!
Sardonic Jarod. He was savage af! But he wasn't lying. It seemed like things were coming to a head with Parker always waking instead of telling him how she feels and they needed this and we needed some serious sex to happen and I think some of the tension has been relieved between them now. Win-win!! Face concealing degrees lol but she did and that was so out of character for her and you're right. You wanted her to swim for it instead of staying with Jarod. Homicidally glaring Jarod lol. Girl you are hilarious! She ended up cold and wet anyway so i can see that. He was pissed at her. He'd looked at me like that I would have made a swim for the boat too lol. You probably agree. Anyhoo amazingly done as always Mirage. Give us more soon. If you want them to have sex in every chapter until this story is complete I'll be ok with that. hint hint wink wink.
Jarod saying "ladies first" while watching Parker as they fuck and knowing she's close to orgasming is probably the most Jarod thing ever and I know Parker's hands over face thing was just keeping in character as she was on the tv series. Jarod seemed dominate during the IOTH show and Parker seemed demur and submissive and... it was freaking weird. But she recovered well in this and you still kept her in character. Thank you for all you do to keep this fandom alive and the characters alive. I love it. I've said it before. I wish you were writing the novels. You know these characters so well.
Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed [Report This]Date: 08/08/19 08:08 pm
OMG!!! I am SO in love with this story. I read tons of sex scenes but yours blow them all away and thank you for letting this pair confront each other with their pain finally. They argued, they both got emotional, they were both honest, and then sex. It needed to happen all of it needed to happen and IN that order. I love the gif you added in the end notes too. Jarod was actually watching her cover her face so that must have sucked for him lol. His emotional HOW DARE YOU was gut wrenchinng and Parker's internal thoughts about the floor splitting the f open and swallowing her ... ahhhh you write them the way they were meant to be written the way they are on the tv series. Beautiful. Congrats! Please give me more. More sex for them would be great too. ;)
Reviewer: JarodandParker4ever Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/08/19 12:35 am
God in triplicate lol. I love this. Oh, my God. I love that they weren't in sync completely, that Parker's anger got in the way a little and that little kind of scene of surrender when Parker just kept saying his name and all the bark went out of her voice and she was left panting. SO emotional and your erotica is always HOT. Damn. You should be writing the official novels. And until then YOU are writing my official novels. This for me is offical. I just need more. SO hot! It was perfect. The ending lol. YOURS asshole. Lol. Perfect. So very Miss Parker and Jarod was so very Jarod and sweet.
More please?
Reviewer: Jen Signed [Report This]Date: 07/08/19 06:04 pm
Holy WOWS Mirage. Okay okay okay!!!
I love that Jarod was watching her the entire time and that she kept saying his name first as if to caution him but then all of that bite going out of her voice and then just panting. Got to go change my panties for now. Wow. MORE!
Reviewer: Christoph Signed [Report This]Date: 07/08/19 04:24 am
Oh. Oh, wow. That last line is the bitch slap to end all bitch slaps. Jarod deserves it. She was in love with him I think so yes I think this would be the correct reaction. Eli is amazing as is Stella, the Miss Parker whisperer. Love that.
Magnificent prose and story telling. More please?
Author's Response:
I think she might have been in love with him- or at least loved him. I'm glad you like it. Thanks you so much for reading and for the lovely review, Contessa.
Reviewer: Contessa Signed [Report This]Date: 06/03/19 03:49 am
So... Mirage, you have outdone yourself again. Let me start by saying I'm not THAT Michael so you can stay relaxed and all.. I read another review and I got curious but anyway I'm not an actor and never have been..Someone on twitter found my twitter and asked me if the reviewer named.. well I would never want to freak you out by pretending to be that Michael.
With that out of the way....
I love this story and that Miss Parker shows Jarod her pain. That last line hurt Jarod. He won't recover for a long time. You characters are perfect. The characters we already know are perfect. Over all this is a solid chapter and Pretender calibre and can't get better. More please? Please don't stay away so long next time.
Until next time..
Author's Response:
Reviewer: Michael Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 25/02/19 09:17 pm
Okay I love this and I'm so hooked. You are an amazing storyteller and writer and I need more. Now. Yeah this is perfect and Eli is so realitstic. Parker should be pissed at Jarod. I like how plausible it all is when you write them. Please keep writing. I mean it. Don't stop writing ever.
Oh and touche on the review response. So I wasn't really bullying meanly just playing with you about meeting the real Jarod so I'm glad you're not angry and you don't take things seriously. But now I see that it's my fault that I haven't introduced you to Michael T. Weiss.... I see what you did there and I like it. You probably didn't expect this but now I will have to fix my mistake by totally introducing you two because he is so damn wonderful and I know you will freaking love him...I can even take you out partying and get you drunk first or get a beta blocker... some of his fans get woozy and too excited. This one girl I knew was so freaked out nervous it was 2 cute. She was terrified lol. But he's soooo nice. He's really so nice. The nicest ever. He really puts women at ease and he really put his arm around me and everything for my selfie with him. Hot. You'll lvoe it. It's sooooo exciting. Every fan who writes fan fic for the Pretender HAS to meet him. You HAVE to do it. I sent you an email.
Author's Response:
Um.
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Lorraina Signed [Report This]Date: 23/02/19 01:15 am
Mirage thank you for writing and sharing your talent with us. You're keeping these characters alive and it means so much to me. I love this story, the clarity with which you write, and how in character the characters are. Thank you.
Author's Response:
Thank you, Gunner.
Reviewer: Gunner Signed [Report This]Date: 22/02/19 09:45 pm
Can I please have some more of this? You really get into the minds of both toddlers, children, tweens, teens and adults and even wise old shrinks, all genders, and so on. It's wild the way you do it and no one writes Jarod and MP the way you do. So spot on. I just need more. Please.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, O Dark One.
Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed [Report This]Date: 20/02/19 09:10 pm
There you ARE! I love this. I love Jarod's "what I mean is what the hell do you mean Jarod' lol. Parker plays this out well, giving a calm face and she must be going a little crazy inside but doesn't show that until she's alone with Jarod again. She's loyal to her children and will do the thing that makes them happy and that is the best for them even if it hurts her and means having to include Jarod who really shouldn't have vanished the way he did. Her confession that she never fought him or he would have been in a cage is why she's having such a hard time. I love his reaction to learning that she could have cornered him when he returned to Scotland to chase the lead on his mother... and that's so plausible in the direction the show could take after Carthis.
Thank you so much for keeping these characters alive and relevant and in a way that makes sense. I will be grateful always.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you're liking this, Chloe.
Thank you for reading and for the lovely review.
Reviewer: Chloe Signed [Report This]Date: 19/02/19 01:03 am
Hooray! So glad you're back with an update to this. First off don't say sorry for not updating sooner. You don't owe me an apology at all after everything you've given us. I know how real life is and I get that you're busy and you're like everyone else and you get stressed out. I know before you said you like to disconnect as much as possible from the interwebs. Really I get it. You do the best you can and... wow that's extremely amazing. Just do what you have to for you and write when you can. Second off... this was the best thing ever. I love Stella. I love Eli. I love the plausibility and that Parker would still be resentful of Jarod and pissed. She's not going to just be over that so soon. He hurt her deeply by not letting her know he was still alive and that's why Eli was raised without his biological father... all that missed time and now the run away attempt. Parker would totally react this way.
That last line. Ow! Jarod's going to be hurting bad for a while from that one.
More. Please?
Reviewer: Christoph Signed [Report This]Date: 18/02/19 08:11 pm
Welcome back Mirage! You have been sorely missed! But this was worth the wait! I've said before how well I feel you flesh out Jarod and Miss Parker. It's also true of the characters you have created.
It's hilarious how much like Miss Parker Eli is. 'He is right here!' That was great! Eli is like a combination of both of them. This was a great chapter. Nice father and son moments. Eli seems more mature than either of his parents!
Thank you as always for both updating and creating Pretender stories. You are basically the only one keeping Miss Parker and Jarod 'alive'. I'm very grateful for that!
Reviewer: twisted Anonymous [Report This]Date: 17/02/19 04:28 pm
I've been reading this and emailed reviews but I just want to thank you again for keeping the characters alive. No one fleshes them out as well as you can and you've brought them into 2018 brilliantly. Stella shines. So do you Mirage. More please?
Author's Response:
There will be more. Thank you for reading and for the lovely review, Melinda.
Reviewer: Melinda Signed [Report This]Date: 18/10/18 04:59 pm
Always a pleasure to read you Mirage. I've spent the evening with this story and I'm in love with it. I think it's telling that Jarod understands that he repulses Paker but I think he knows she's attracted in some ways or attracted to him at least when she isn't aware it's him, attracted to what he can do for her. They seem to mutually acknowledge that he can give her what she really wants but she's too repulsed by him to allow herself the satisfaction that he can give her. It's such a paradox and it's not fair and it's in keeping with canon but I sense a change and whether I'm right or wrong I look forward to what comes next. The story and your writing are so intriguing. More please?
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Contessa. This is fanfic. There is no right or wrong. Reviewers are never wrong. I tend to agree with you that Parker may possibly feel some attraction towards Jarod and given the circumstances that would probably make her even more resistant (or make her want to be more resistant) to those dimples of his. It's difficult to blame her. Thanks again.
Reviewer: Contessa Signed [Report This]Date: 17/10/18 07:22 am
I haven't yet reviewed this but I'm reading and I'm loving every word. You keep me coming back like the addict I am.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Jillian.
Reviewer: Jillian Signed [Report This]Date: 17/10/18 05:19 am
Beautiful prose and so so eloquent. You amaze me. Your voice is strong and you know these characters and where to place them to perfection. I'm eternally grateful Mirage.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing. You are too kind.
Reviewer: Jameason Signed [Report This]Date: 16/10/18 08:00 pm
Trying to resist the urge to share you on twitter and facebook but I love this. I don't want to piss you off or anything so I won't share you but I wish you would let me!! I love the characterizations. You're so good. You are my favorite pretender author and one of my favorite authors ever. I want more. I love this. I love your writing. Please more.
Author's Response:
That's awesome of you Archange. Keep resisting, okay? You can do it. I won't be "pissed off" (or anything). That said, I didn't sign up for that sort of attention. This is a nice, comfy website (and it's gorgeous too). Thanks for all the kind words. There shall be more.
Reviewer: Archange Signed [Report This]Date: 10/10/18 07:34 pm
Bravo bravo! Always impressive, always exquisite. I was concerned when you didn't update within the week of the previous chapter. I saw nothing on twitter to indicate you had updated today or yesterday and feared you'd left us. I hope you weren't mad about last chapter's twitter frenzy. People enjoy reading and this is a hyperfan fandom. We made the creators give us two moveies. We need to make them give us another 2 movies. Be proud and feel accomplished. I'm ecstatic that you've returned and I hope you're well. This was another excellent chapter, small but filled with meaning. You leave me craving more. I hope you will continue. Until next Mirage. Ciao.
Author's Response:
I recently encountered a nasty Hurricane that shares your name-- because I always end up in the dead wrong place at precisely the dead wrong time despite my belief that it's safer (and more Eco-friendly) (and more intellectually stimulating) to stay home and read. I. Can't. Be. Still. Speaking of ending up in the wrong place: I wasn't angry about twitter. I didn't know about it until now. I don't approve of my scribblings straying from missing pieces, however, it's fleeting consternation more than anger and I try not to think about the things I can't control. I'm not proud or accomplished. I'm simply appeasing the Muses. Let's not make this more than it is. I will continue. Thanks for the well wishes and same to you.
Reviewer: Michael Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/10/18 07:36 pm
