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Title: Chapter 11

How is your cervix lol. Jarod's a tirp. In a certain position and depending on a woman's cycle that can happen. I've had a bruised cervix during a wild weekend lol. They had what people call BAD SEX there for a minute which I love because it's usually all perfect and they usually both have their orgasm at the same time. She came first. "LADIES FIRST"... so that was sexy and Jarod-y and I love it and omg I'm still talking about the previous chapter lol because OH MY GOD!!


Jarod's confession, the way you describe Parker's tears being dislodged, the fingers at her lips... beautiful. He is the same pain in her ass he's always been. SIGHS!!

Oh Mirage. You're so brilliant.


Reviewer: Lisa Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/09/20 04:46 am
Title: Chapter 11

I will never get over Jarod's how is your cervix? Mouth on floor moment to end all moments.

Author's Response:

Ha. You'll never get over it?

My. Poor. Brain. 

Reviewer: needlepoint Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/04/20 09:42 pm
Title: Chapter 11

Ah, Mirage how I love your stories. You keep The Pretender alive for me and I am eternally grateful!

I love the way you write the characters especially Miss Parker and Jarod.

more More MORE!

(please and thank you!)

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing, Twisted. I appreciate the feedback- and wow, you are too kind. There will be more.

Reviewer: twisted Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/11/19 10:32 pm
Title: Chapter 11

It means so much to me that you're keeping the original series and the characters I love so dear alive. You write beautiful and so professionnelle. 

Merci Mirage!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, MlleParker.

Reviewer: MlleParker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/11/19 09:51 pm
Title: Chapter 11

Exquisite as always. It's a pleasure to read you.

Author's Response:

Thank you, Brian.

Reviewer: Brian Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/11/19 08:00 pm
Title: Chapter 11

More of this please? Don't get me wrong. I love the dark Jarod stories but this is amazing. Just when I began to wonder if you could only write dark stories you surprise me with this. I know you've written a few other more normal stories. I guess you've really only written two or three really dark stories. It seems like more sometimes tho. Excuse my rambling. Jetlag. This is amazing. That's all I wanted to say. I'm going to lie down now.

Author's Response:

Ah, yes, haha, I get this A LOT. I've scribbled more not-entirely-the-King-of-hellJarod fics than spawn-of-SatanJarod fics. His baseline is rather dark, however. This is a man that stole an organ from a convict who was minding own business serving his time in prison prior to being broken out of prison-- which is a felony. Jarod committed a host of felonies in that one episode alone. This is a dark series and I do tend to scribble dark fic.

No worries though. I hope you had a nice rest.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: shauna Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/11/19 01:45 am
Title: Chapter 11

"remind me not to put you on speaker phone: lol. Jarod is so funny and Parker's deadpan responses are funny. I like how she don't act shook at all by anything he says. She's all you can talk while eat. I'm glad they're gonna have dinner. Finally. The characters are all perfect the things they say are brilliant. It's like watching the series all over again. Thank you for that. Congrats on this.

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing, Con-0.

Reviewer: Con-O Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/11/19 11:48 pm
Title: Chapter 11

Keep it on Mirage. I can never get my fill of your writing.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Archange Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/11/19 11:37 pm
Title: Chapter 11

Ooh oh! I love this. Hit me right in the freaking feels Mirage.


Reviewer: Lorraina Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/11/19 06:34 am
Title: Chapter 11

That's my favourite Chopin piece and it's so orgasmic and so fitting for Jarod. I love how you modernize my favourite series and my favourite characters. You write them HOW they are and I can see them and I love it. Please keep keeping them alive for me. You're everything Mirage. This is everything. I love you bunches.

Reviewer: The Miss Parker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/11/19 11:35 pm
Title: Chapter 11

Your work is SO addicting. It takes alot to keep my attention but you have all of my attention. Please update soon.

Reviewer: Rachael Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/11/19 03:10 am
Title: Chapter 11

It's always exciting to see Mirage back in recently added section again. I love this, their interaction is so real and it's like being there with them. This chapter was too short and that's my only complaint. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Jillian Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/11/19 05:13 am
Title: Chapter 11

Welcome Back!! You are always sorely missed. Miss Parker having Jarod audited is the most Miss Parker thing ever and I love it. You are the master of dialog and leave me wanting more. More. Now. Please!!

Reviewer: Christoph Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/11/19 08:05 pm
Title: Chapter 11

Jarod is hilarious and I'm so glad you've kept him that way. Jarod has also grown up ALOT and had some time to realize he'd made some mistakes and... if I'm honest that would have to happen way way way before any kind of trust too because our boywonder Jarod has done some really f*cked things to Parker in the past and Parker probably puts in the context of the game and that's how he played it but I feel better knowing that Jarod is more woke and is willing to work to earn her trust. Parker says nothing. She doesn't say she approves or think it's cool that he tries to earn her trust she just asks him who he is. I love his answer "the same pain in the ass" awesome. This is Pretenderlicious. so many feels and so many shippery pangs. I need more. You are a GENIUS.

Reviewer: Melissa B Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/11/19 01:30 am
Title: Chapter 11

OMG! Woot! Jarod wouldn't be Jarod if Jarod wasn't candid about sex and the "who are you" and then him replying with "someone who is..." is just like the series and yes it SHOULD be like the tv series in so many ways because this is fiction based on the TV series so thank you THANK YOU THANKYOU!!! These characters are... the characters and just like they are supposed to be and I love Jarod's confession. Oh my HEART!! Shipper heaven... even though you aren't a shipper. Thank you. More please please please?

Reviewer: Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/11/19 11:24 pm
Title: Chapter 11

A missing piece for missing pieces indeedy Mirage. That was a huge confession for Jarod to make and it's the only thing that makes sense and I appreciate and enjoyed the comparisions between walls in construction and walls that Miss Parker has. More. Please?

Reviewer: James Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/11/19 06:44 pm
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