MP readily admits that Jarod is a source of confusion which... isn't the same as confusing her. It's just his being alive again is a source of confusion. She's honest with him.
Oh crap I have to go back to work but I'll be back.
Reviewer: Lisa Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 07/09/20 02:18 am
Whows!
That's all I got.
I could copy and paste the entire story I bet to show all of the parts I love. I'll spare you all of that reading. You worked so hard writing this I can tell it's so professional.
Need more. But I have to sleep or I'll get fired.
Reviewer: Jameason Signed [Report This]Date: 19/08/20 04:37 am
I love this. I mean I really love this. I love how well thought and well written it is. I love the writing, characterizations, dialog, how in character all of the characters are, the way the story itself pulls me in just like the old episodes of the pretender, how eloquent you write, how your stories never have that dreaded lag and are never weighed down with dialog.. I don't know how you do it... hope you didn't pitch a deal to the creature downstairs if you catch my drift... You work is consistent too and has that certain something I can find only in your writing... and the pretender dvds. Please keep going. You're a treasure m'dear. Can I say that I'm Sydney's biggest fan ever ever ever (ever lol) and that Parker would say "Sydney snitched" in this postSydney pretendverse is a stroke of genius. Even though your Muse seems to be sailing the Jarod Parker ship I can tell you have an appreciation for Sydney and Broots. They are central to any story in any pretendverse and I'm glad you know that.
Reviewer: Jillian Signed [Report This]Date: 04/06/18 09:20 pm
I go away for a week and you update... just my luck. I love this. After the hell of a week I've had Mirage reading you is like being home with warm cocoa and a blanket even though I'm not home right now and there's no cocoa and my life basically is sucking. Thank you. You make me feel normal again and like everything might be all right. I've never seen anyone flesh the characters out the way you do. You write with clarity and the dialog is truly exceptional. It's like watching the dvds again and that's good because we'll never get that ending in a movie or tv format. It'll be books only. I'm going to say this knowing you object to it but the truth is dear is that if the ending is going to be books only I will only be reading yours. Your writing is top notch. Please more. Dying to see what happens next.
Reviewer: Chloe Signed [Report This]Date: 28/05/18 12:12 am
Holy Mother! To all of those who wondered if you could write Jarodnormal and not just Jaroddark and Jarodevil and Jarodbroken... here we are. Again. Jarod is all of those things all of the time, some traits come out to play at different times with different people. but he's always dark, broken, and a little evil and a little normal. He's matured in this and seems prepared to accept responsibility. Mirage Mirage you write them so perfectly. I don't even miss the tv series anymore. It feels like I"m watching it every time I read you. More of this please?
Reviewer: Gunner Signed [Report This]Date: 23/05/18 12:46 am
Wows. You make it seem so effortless. The pair have some unfinished business and there is definitely tension and neither are denying it but they are managing. It's beautiful Mirage..magical. It's realistic and so plausible that she'd be struggling the way she is to accept that he's alive and has been. I think it would hurt to know he knew she was grieving all that time and he could have ended her pain but didn't. He knew she was strong enough but.... man, that's tough. She didn't deserve to be hurt like that. But he didn't deserve to be chased like that. You brilliantly showed all the complexities and are better than anyone at fleshing out the characters and bringing to life. Thank you. It's a mercy and comfort to know you're here. I've been saying it for 7 years at least and it's true. You do magic.
Reviewer: Christoph Signed [Report This]Date: 21/05/18 04:30 am
I've been checking ten times a day for an update from you!! I love this. I'm glad you didn't go away for too long. If all you did was write for us, I wouldn't have to wait. I want more of this. I take refuge in your writing. Please more?
Reviewer: Archange Signed [Report This]Date: 20/05/18 09:31 pm
