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Title: Chapter 2

Jarod hasn't changed.... and Jarod has changed. They both have and haven't. They've grown but together that tension sinks between them and it's like sparks but Parker doesn't have a gun anymore so it's not as exhilaritating as it once was.

You nail the characters like no other and the dynamic between them and the dynamite between them. These are just gonna be small thought reviews I had when I read this a moment ago. You can tell I got to get back to work lol.

Reviewer: Lisa Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/09/20 02:11 am
Title: Chapter 2

"He was my only family," said Parker sorrowfully and with a sudden stridency in her voice that was as startling as it was troubling.

"He still is your family," reminded Jarod gently. "Look, I was hoping-"

Ohh god. I can't even.

Mind blown. Heart broken. They hurt so much. They hope so much.

The characters ... ARE the characters. You write them pretender perfectly. You think up the most intriguing stories. This chapter is poignant. The pain is profound. You write with clarity. I can't say enough. Because I'm not a writer.

I will always come back to you. Thank you for writing, for being prolific and for keeping the fandom alive.

Reviewer: Jameason Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/08/20 04:24 am
Title: Chapter 2

OH f*Ck. This review should have gone to The Return part 5.

I love this story. Less complicated and also so complicated. You really flesh them out and bring them alive. I need more.

Reviewer: Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/05/18 03:50 am
Title: Chapter 2

I love the verbal volley, so like the televised series that it gives me chills. "yes, his penis accidentally...." lol I'm laughing like a maniac over here.

Reviewer: Archange Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/05/18 12:43 am
Title: Chapter 2

If this is going the way I hope it's going I'm going to love it more than I already do. Glad Jarod is alive. He's annoying sure but come on? Annoying is better than dead. I'm loving every word. You should be writing the Pretender novels. I'll say it again. It can't be said enough. I noticed she called him "Agent" and she did that in Nemesis too. You said it was to emotionally disconnect herself and she's doing it again huh? That has to hurt. I love Jarod's apology all the same. He's too sweet sometimes. Longer chapters would be perfect. This goes so fast. I love that there's another chapter waiting for me after this one. :) So happy. Thank you.

Reviewer: The Miss Parker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/04/18 01:09 am
Title: Chapter 2

Chapters are short and like a train..hope that's ok. Words like train and orange and huge and piss yellow are kind of sucky these days and I'm sorry. It goes fast is what I mean. I love your writing. It's so eloquent and succinct. I don't know  how you do it but I'm glad you do. Love you. Thanks.

Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/04/18 02:00 am
Title: Chapter 2

OMG. More please?

Reviewer: Jessi Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/04/18 11:29 pm
Title: Chapter 2

LOVE how Jarod gets her attention. And this "you didn't self-resurrect to inquire about my happiness." I can see Michael and Andrea having this conversation. You really flesh them out like no one else is able to in writing format like this. I'm impressed and in awe. You're magic. I've always said it and always will. It's magic Mirage. Thank you from my heart.

Reviewer: Mlle Parker Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/04/18 10:18 pm
Title: Chapter 2

I came on here because I was bored on the train. I didn't imagine you would update so quickly. I should not be surprised. You are quite prolific.

This chapter was both hilarious and sad. I really do enjoy how you write the charectors of  Jarod and Miss Parker.

Speaking of, who in their right (or wrong) mind would cheat on her!!!??!??

Thanks as always for writing and updating your myriad of stories on here.

Reviewer: twisted Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 30/03/18 05:51 pm
Title: Chapter 2

I remember how she made of the "ho-down"  people in Lyle's old school but now here she is ... that was a stroke of genius Mirage. There always ways a little... or actually aLOT of hypocrisy in Parker and that makes this all the more plausible but her reasons aren't bad, even if she is a little bit bad and a hypocrite. When people have children things change and people will do things they never thought they'd do to keep those children safe ...just ask American schools having "drills" and "buckets of rocks" now to learn how not to be shot in school OMG.


What is telling and I do love it when Parker shows her true feelings is the bitterness and pain when she tells Jarod that Ethan was the only family she'd had then. She was really hurt by that..

I reread this looking for some forshadowing to guess your next move but honestly I have no idea where you're going with this. I'm with you on the ride though. I want more so much right now. Oh please hurry and write. Love this!

Reviewer: Gunner Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/03/18 05:47 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Ohhhhhh. Miss Parker cheated on by a hubby? I hope she really will be kicking Greg out. I hope Jarod will be moving in. lol. Can't help it. I'm shippery even though you're not. Love this. So good to see you back here again. Wow. I'm stoked af! Thank you.

Reviewer: Miss Parkere Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/03/18 11:52 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Mirage you have made my week. So much to love and so perfect. More please?

Reviewer: Xena Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/03/18 07:45 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Oh, beautiful and eloquent prose. It kills me. I love it. So many updates and they are all so professionally styled! I keep thinking what we did to deserve this and then I remember I haven't shared you on twitter or facebook for a little while.... is that it? You will write for us if we DON'T share you? That's not fair. We want to share so everyone will get to read you. It's like ice cream..when it's good we want to give everyone a taste. I'll try not to be too overly enthusiastic but I love you and I love this and I need more. Only complaint is the chapters are so short. It proves that wonderful small things can come in small little packages...but I'd like longer chapters. "You thought I was going to kill him?" Jarod: "admit it you kinda want to now" lol Love it. Keep going please.

Reviewer: Christoph Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/03/18 03:44 am
Title: Chapter 2

Yikes. I have sympathy for Parker here but I also don't fault Jarod for the heavier hand. His intentions were clear and they were good intentions. I didn't think you hated him. Not too much anyway. MP has wrapped herself in false security and relaxed maybe too much? With Thomas she struggled to personify both the Ice Queen image and the loving girlfriend when Thomas and her family all dined. It's easy to play one role with one group of people and wear a different mask around a whole different group but when both groups are in the same room we become torn I think. She's made this new life and can barely cope when confronted with the old one and that's plausible and even expected. It's nice to see her reveal even more vulnerability and her reaction to the affair contained comedic elements which made it all the more entertaining. You contine to blow me away. I eagerly await the next chapter. Until next time Mirage...

Reviewer: Michael Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/03/18 07:13 pm
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