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Title: Chapter 1

Oh wow. I need more of this in my life right now.

Reviewer: Sela Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/04/18 10:12 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Yas!! Oh yes. Please give me more.

Reviewer: Pretenderoxx Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/04/18 03:09 am
Title: Chapter 1

Oh oooh Mirage I'm thrilled that you're here. I love this new story and I hope you will write more. So much here to love. Thank you for writing and for sharing.

Reviewer: Mlle Parker Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/04/18 10:14 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Hooray! I was wondering if you would give us a new story now that you've finished Who will guard the guards? and yes..so thrilled about this I can barely stand it!! Thank you. It's so perfect. Way short chapters though. I read through both chapter and kept refreshing hoping you'd add more. Not yet tho. I so can't wait. More please?

Reviewer: Gunner Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/03/18 05:41 pm
Title: Chapter 1

More more more! I love this. Wow. You are freaking amazing!

Reviewer: Miss Parkere Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/03/18 10:46 pm
Title: Chapter 1

OMG! More please? I'm so excited!

Reviewer: Christoph Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/03/18 03:37 am
Title: Chapter 1

OMG! Second chapter is as solid and perfect as the first. Love!!! More please?

Reviewer: Leslie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/03/18 07:47 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Brilliant. I'm not surprised that you're able to write so many high qualities stories at once. I've come to expect this level of professionalism from you and I hope you never change a thing about yourself. The writing, plot, dialouge, and descriptive work are stunning. Something particularly intriguing is that Jarod's rethinking his strategy with her, ie advising her to breathe, trying to correct his error, etc. Hehee. Excellent Mirage.

Until next time...

 

Reviewer: Michael Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/03/18 06:59 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Woot. I thought Jarod was dead! You had me going. Ohhhh but Sydney and Jarod's clone are. :( Love how she embraced him thinking he was the clone but then couldn't wait to get out of his grasp when she learned it was Jarod. Oohhhh Mirage. I love you. Thank you for this new story. And ditto on winter. Winter needs to gtf on already. More please?

Reviewer: Leslie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/03/18 09:01 pm
Title: Chapter 1

New Mirage story yes please! You just perfectly described winter this year in the first paragraph. He's a defiant old bugger and needs to go and stay gone. Just when I think spring has sprung bloody winter is like 'not so fast' lol. OK another childhood memory. I used to jump from my moving bike too. I love this story. I love that Jarod isn't dead  and that Parker has a family. Parker's reaction was spot on. She only loves me when I'm dead. lol. Poor Jarod. Why do I feel that this sweet beginning is about to turn ugly. How ever this story goes I'm in for the ride.

Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/03/18 07:45 pm
Title: Chapter 1

A new story from Mirage! Now that's worth a late night visit to this site! Thanks for this! Always a pleasure to read one of your stories. Looking forward to what comes next.



Author's Response:

Thank you, twisted, for reading and reviewing. I intend to post another chapter tomorrow.

Reviewer: twisted Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/03/18 02:06 am
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