You gave two chapters at once so you get two reviews for them. More of this. I have to see if Sydney is ok..like now. You are amazing really. You know Sydney and all the characters so well and this is plausible too. You already know your original characters rock. Keep this coming. Merry Christmas to you and peace. :)
Reviewer: Jen Signed
[Report This]Date: 24/12/16 08:12 pm
Please give me more of this. Twisted oxygen cylinder cart? Raines? OMG. OMG!
Reviewer: Jen Signed [Report This]Date: 24/12/16 08:09 pm
Your Muses finally let you stop writing Jarod-Parker fics? I love DarkJarod but ok I'm hooked on this. An intriguing and original plot and an unsuspected treat. You blow me away. It's always a pleasure to read you as you are one of a few authors who can hold my attention. You write eloquently. Short chapters this time but I know you're probably busy. Thanks for giving us something to read. Happy Xmas to you dear one. You made mine special again this year. Short days are depressing. You'll get through it. Write for us to distract yourself.
Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed [Report This]Date: 24/12/16 05:25 pm
Happy Holidays to you as well Mirage! Always a cause for celebration to see you on top of the 'Recently Added' list.
Have you ever written a story where the main characters weren't Miss Parker and /or Jarod?
Regardless, Sydney deserves his due. I'm interested in seeing where you will take this.
As always thank you for writing and updating. YOU keep 'The Pretender' alive!
Reviewer: twisted Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/12/16 12:49 pm
