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Title: Chapter 11: The Bargain

I don't know who the alias person is (I've never watched much tv), however, I enjoyed this chapter. Lyle is just rotten (and easy on the eyes), wonderfully rotten.

 



Author's Response:

Yeah, Lyle always was. And you should give a chance to Alias, because it was a great show, one of the best I've ever seen. If you enjoyed tP, you're likely to love Alias.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/09/14 11:38 pm
Title: Chapter 11: The Bargain

what a turn of events!!! I was off the grid for two weeks again, on vacation without internet, and i loooved to see you updating this one! and i completely understand why you like to write lyle. so devellish, so mean, so opportunistic. he makes the interaction between jarod  and mp even more beautiful. the way she says "you have no idea" is so wonderful to imagine. she said that line often in the show, but now she has not only that wondeful icy glare, but also a loving fullyness swinging with it. and i loved to imagine jarods surprised reaction. so good!!!! thanks again and again for this chapter and for updating, i'm patiently waiting for numero 12. :) merci, grazie, thanks so much and dankeschön!



Author's Response:

I was wondering where you were! ;) Thanks for your thoughts, as usual, I'm really glad that someone's still reading this.

I promise a new update soon, stay tuned!

Miss Roxy

Reviewer: lipamo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/06/14 05:54 pm
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