oh reviewing the fifth chapter i forgot to tell you that i was laughing so hard again when he thanked her and she thought first he referred to the sex. sooo funny.
in this one it's so great how you let them manage their first real fight and her disappointment. wonderfully written, just: wow.
the last part of confessions seemed a little rushed to me, although i completely understand why you avoided dialogues here. it's plenty what they discuss and you still capture their feelings while talking. but i'm a sucker for dialogue, and you're so freakingly good at it.
Author's Response:
Ah Ah, you're talking about Miss Parker's sarcasm. Well, I like her kidding with Jarod like that.
Well, about the fight...I've read many thoughts about Catherine's diary and someone even told that Jarod was selfish because he never gave it to Miss Parker.
1st, we don't know if he ever delivered it or if he read it.
2nd, I don't think he would have ever hidden something so important from her. There should have been a reason.
So I wrote this "fight" to explain the diary-thing from my POV.
And about the -rush- confessions, well I felt like I needed to tell something without dialogue. I know that's probably one of the best things I can do, writing dialogues (probably the ONLY thing I'm good at), but this one...I don't know, I liked it just simple as I put it down. No spoken words, only tales. Like if this was only their moment, not ours.
Reviewer: lipamo Signed
[Report This]Date: 01/05/14 05:13 pm
Finally, some secrets revealed. Loved the update tP soulsister!
Author's Response:
I really enjoyed writing this chapter. I love trying to "imagine" how things would have gone. A few months ago I had this conversation with other people of the fandom, saying that Jarod had been "selfish" because he'd kept Catherine's diary. I mean, we didn't even know if he ever read it or delivered it to Miss Parker! That was a point I wanted to straight out. As much as other few things that I really loved in both Miss Parker and Jarod's moments of weakness...
Reviewer: KSPretenderFan Signed [Report This]Date: 31/03/14 03:28 pm
