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Title: Chapter Two

Another incredibly well-written chapter.  You have been taking lessons from our beloved PTBs giving us mcuh without giving us anything! Cannot wait to see where this goes and how everyone fits it.

 

It is unusual for me to like original charcaters in Pretender stories, but i find myself here liking both Elizabeth and Patrick very much. I also really love that the Institute is 'legitimate' in almost everywhere, even while the shadow of the Centre looms over them.

 

Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the reviews!  And more importantly, thank you for putting up with my earlier drafts and being my sounding board for figuring out all the angst.  You are a great and powerful Beta- I am truly appreciative!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the reviews!  And more importantly, thank you for putting up with my earlier drafts and being my sounding board for figuring out all the angst.  You are a great and powerful Beta- I am truly appreciative!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the reviews!  And more importantly, thank you for putting up with my earlier drafts and being my sounding board for figuring out all the angst.  You are a great and powerful Beta- I am truly appreciative!

Reviewer: jacci Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/10/13 03:08 am
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