Forgot to tell this: I'm curious about where you intend to take your story. So far, aside from some typos and syntax, I'm enjoying the plot. You might also want to pay some closer attention to the way your characters behave. At times, they seem too erratic and imature for their age, not to mention their personality. All this considerered, be sure I'll give you a full review once this story is finished. Have fun!Reviewer: Joel Gomes Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/08/13 11:39 pm
PLEASE continue with 'Hold Fast To Dreams'Reviewer: twisted Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 13/08/13 08:55 pm
Very good start ! Carry on pleease !
thanks for the review! :D ok, will do.Reviewer: lucy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/07/13 04:47 pm
nice. not telling your BFF that you were going to post this, WTF?
D'uh, of course continue!!!
dude, i'm sorry, i forgot. and it was a whim! and it was like, 4 in the morning, do you want me to call you next time?! hehehe
ok, ok, no need to get all testy about it. sheesh, show a little appreciation for the free entertainment! ;)Reviewer: KSPretenderFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/13 05:08 pm