What do I think? I think you are doing a fine job and I hope and suggest you continue writing the story. Your way. As for a kick-*** MP? Well, Andrea herself said (in an interview) that we've seen "more vulnerability" over the years; we've seen her cry, shoot people, get sloshed, meltdown- it all depends on what life throws her. I find that your jeans and sweater Miss Parker works quite nicely- that's the great thing about writing this fandom: Parker can be tough, yes, but we know the walls can fall down.
Is there anything that would make the fic more interesting? I think it is interesting as-is. Besides, interesting is all a matter of opinion anyway. Go with your gut.
Author's Response:
OMG! Mirage! I am so not worthy! Thank you for leaving a review! I have been a long time admirer of your writing and stories (dark as some of them can be) often times reading with my eyes hiding behind my hands! But I'm glad you see the potential in my writing. I tend to be a pollyanna-esque writer. So most of my stories will be sappy and syrupy with a kick-a** MP and less whiney!Jarod.
This fic was my first effort so I wanted to test the waters a bit to see what would happen. I never know what the fandom wants because it has not been as active as it once was. And I agree that interesting is a matter of opinion for sure. But I am one of those needy people that need to know that people like my fic *sad begging eyes*.
But again, thank you so much! I will definitely keep writing. Now I just have to split time between two fandoms.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed
[Report This]Date: 15/04/13 11:47 pm
I'm also a MPJ fan,keep the good work!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! This fic is mostly romance and it certainly won't be thick into fall of the centre plot. I also tend to write happy fics because I'm too much of a chicken to write angst and the darker fics. I am a big fan of Ginger and Phenyx and will probably pattern most of my fics to theirs.
Thanks for taking the time to review . . .
Reviewer: dimana Anonymous [Report This]Date: 15/04/13 09:31 pm
