awesome! i am stoked to read more. love the way you write them.

LOVE this Mirage!! I've been saying it for years and I'll keep saying you should be writing some novels for us. This could be printed and sold and be worth my hard earned dosh! THIS is the quality and correct characteristations I expect when I open a Pretender novel. They magically come to life when you write them. Give us more. Soon please.

Mirage Mirage Mirage Mirage.... I'm leaning back all chilled with a coke and getting really hot thanks to Jarod stroking Parker's hair unconsciously and all... uhuh and asking permission so sweetly... you get it? And then Parker twirls herself into a child and now I know how Jarod felt in his near coma state. Awkward. I think his life was flashing by him as he was running after the car and being hit an SUV and volleyed onto a Mercedes and thrown to the ground and knocked unconscious. I think he knew in his mind that Parker was being abducted and she is such a large part of his life. It was beautiful and haunting and so real the way you wrote it. I think he relies on her in some ways and that's why in adult Parker's absence the little girl is there in his mind. Did NOT SEE THAT COMING. But I love it. Wow. Your writing skills are beyond anything I've read ever. I hope Parker is safe and I KNOW you are going to tell us where she is and what happened to her. Did she find out who the traffickers weere or what? I know you'll tell us. I can't wait. Please will you also update Devil's Advocate, The Return, Oblivion... just all of them please. I know you're busy but I'm begging. THank you to the moon and stars and back again for keeping these characters alive.

Ah Mirage you give it and you take away. It's telling though what goes through Jarod's concussed mind. You keep me guessing young lady. He asked permission, he provided an opportunity for her to say no, stop the kiss. I didn't expect that from you. I believe you accurately and plausibly created in the elevator a way to sort of describe what comes later. His mind while being struck by an SUV returned to an earlier time and created the elevator drop and when he was volleyed onto a Mercedes was when little miss Parker shoved him over the declivity.

Jarod's internal dialog fits him to a T. I hope the Little Misss Parker will remain him until he can retrieve adult Miss Parker. She's a handful and I enjoyed reading Jarod's reaction to the child's presence. The Little Girl was correct to say that he's more afraid of her than he ever has been of adult Miss Parker. Just when I believed I'd read everything I confess you pulled another trick from your magical hat. I didn't think the story could possibly get any better. I'm impressed. Thank you for this. Until next time...

YES YES YES oooh uhhhh. Oh my Goddess! Mirage. They were together when they children or was that a part of the consussion too? Oh my God. Please let Miss Parker be all right. Don't leave hanging too long. Thank you for keeping The Pretender and the chase alive all these years.

Merci beaucoup mon ami! Je ne peux jamais vous remercier pour cela! Je t'aime trop. Je veux lire la suite. Fabuleux Mirage! 

LOVE. So cool how Jarod is rolling it over and over and confusing the waitress who could have brought a salad using ingredients from other dishes. OmG. That was so funny. But there were serious parts as well. Nicely balanced. Just when I think I can't be more amazed with Mirage Mirage goes and pulls out all the stops. I love your writing. Thank you for sharing with us.

I'm intringued and impressed by your insights, storytelling and writing Mirage. The story is plausible and brilliant, the characters are as I remember them. I saw no typos. I love that the pair wax philosophical and pyschological and communicate like adults. Miss Parker wasn't catty about Rachel but instead tried to rationalize to make Jarod feel better and maybe she wasn't talking only about Rachel but herself as well. I think Jarod too was thinking of Miss Parker who had the illusion of choice. Jarod made a valid point but then bam Miss Parker returned with an equally valid point. There may be a choice. The choice may not be obvious. Deep. Honestly I wish you were writing the novels either with or instead of the creators. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. All the best and until next time...

Great story so far, I just got caught up on it all and I'm hooked! I like that Jarod and Miss Parkers skills are (to a certain point) evenly matched. So many Pretender stories barely give MP a chance, J is always ten steps ahead. Even though he was here too for some time, she caught up. And I like that Parker doesn't let him get away with his puppeteer complex! And Kyle/Parker!!! Wow!

I couldn't stop laughing. "Someone has a wicked sense of humor."

I think you have a wicked sense of humor, Mirage, and I wouldn't want it any other way. This was fantastic for many reasons that I won't go into here. I feel that I would bore you to tears. The characterisations were on point. I haven't read any author who writes them as accurately as you do. I've said before it's scary how well you write. It's a pleasurable journey to read you. An experience to be treasured. Your original characters are second to none. Thank you for this.

Until next time...

Ciao.

Keeps getting better and better. I like that they are communicating and that even though you have that Jarod thing you don't constantly have him emasculated. Can't rate it anything but a ten. I give you more if I could. Love your work.

Squee! Mirage update is instant happiness. You do know that you could update every day for us and I'd be happy every day? We know you want to make us happy? Don't you Mirage? Don't you want to make me happy every single day? Don't you don't you don't you?

Yay! Ooh oohhh Mirage Mirage. That was amazing. You surpass your own writing and that can't be easy. I loved this chapter! Magdalena was wonderful. I'd love to chat with her for hours.

Jarod to Miss Parker- 'you can't ignore me forever' and seeing her reaction ,'that wasn't a challenge' lol. Brilliant. I love you!