Great chapter, please update soon!!
Author's Response: Thanks, Aemilius. The next chapter is in the works.
[Report This]Date: 03/05/11 03:45 pm
Um wow, this story is great. What the hell is Jared gonna do now he makes love to her then handcuffs her back up. I have no idea where your gonna go with this and I'm dying to find out. This will be a very hard position Jared just put himself in. Please hurry up with the next chapter, thanks
Author's Response: Thanks again, Megan. I have an idea of where the muse is going, but I'm still deciding on the best route to get her there. Both Parker and Jarod are most definitely in a very precarious position: Both are on the run from several entities and now they've gone and had sex. With each other! Tsk, tsk. I hope Lady Muse knows what she is doing.
Date: 30/04/11 05:45 pm
That was WAY hot Mirage. I tend to love the darker fics, specifically the darker Jarod fics so I really love this and it is a very fine line that you tread I know and I know you don't want to cross into non consent but really, more reluctance would be cool and the cuffs would be ok to use on her during sex. If your muse is willing. So far, I LOVE this!
Author's Response: Thanks, DarkAngel. It's a very fine line indeed and although the muse is very willing, I am not. I won't be adding any non-consent to this fic. I may toss the cuffs/reluctance into the party, hmm, I don't know yet. For you dark and naughty non-conster-ers: Lady Muse may cook something up come autumn (Yes, another insane idea hurled itself at me last night), but for now, I think I'll try not to scare anymore readers, haha.
[Report This]Date: 28/04/11 05:20 am
Sorry for the late review. I knew it would be a hot sex scene (yours always are), but the bit of sweetness with the hand-holding was an unexpected surprise. And he cuffs her again post-coitally! I'm with Jarod - wondering what in the world he'll do next. And the equally interesting - how will Parker respond? :)
Author's Response: Please, don't apologize, Jane. I'm sorry for the late updates, haha, but it can't be helped. Real life can be a pain in the behind. Thanks for the lovely words. I was certain that I was terrible with those scenes, so you've made my night - er morning. I don't know where that palm against palm thought came from but it seemed to work fairly well, I guess and yes, of course, Jarod cuffed her while she was still basking in the post-coital bliss. There could be hell to pay for that but I don't know yet what Jarod will do- or Parker either haha.
Date: 27/04/11 01:16 am
Love it love it!!! This is probably my favorite thing that you've wrote and the best thing I've ever read! I'm so happy to see my favourite couple getting on so well in this little adverture you've put them on. I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks, pretenderoxx. I'm thrilled that you like it. There will be more, not too much more, I hope, it's supposed to be little adventure. *winks*
[Report This]Date: 24/04/11 10:46 pm
This was awesome!!! But i'm curious about her reaction!:-))
Author's Response: Thanks, dimana. I'm curious as well. Hopefully, I'll get the muse to cooperate very soon.
Date: 24/04/11 07:46 pm
oh my god! that was a great story. I can't wait to see where you go with this and what they are going to do now. they crossed a line and will not be able to go back from there especaily jared. By the way I love your stories you are a great writer and just wanted to thank you for taking your time to keep the pretender going after they ended the show.
Author's Response: Thank you, Megan. I'm not sure what the muse has in store for the dysfunctional duo just yet. We shall see.
Date: 23/04/11 02:41 am
WOW! That was totally Hot!!! Can't wait for chapter three.
Author's Response: Thanks, twisted. Chapter three is in the works.
Date: 22/04/11 06:59 pm
Ahhh that was lovely.....wickedly lovely.
Author's Response: I wasn't expecting a review so quick, startled me a bit. I wasn't sure about this chapter- really, I don't what the muse is smoking. Thanks for reading and for the very lovely words, aldysgal.
Date: 22/04/11 04:55 am
please update soon!
Author's Response: I just updated, Aemilius. Thanks.
[Report This]Date: 21/04/11 02:10 pm
NEXT PLEASE
Author's Response: Just updated.
Date: 20/04/11 12:49 am
didn't see this one coming, lol and I vote Miss P in cuffs during sex too lol..ok so my mind is in the gutter hole whatever...we haven't had good old fashioned smut around here in ages...well written as always, great plot no need for beta doh, and like every fic you write, the characters are dead on. More, please?
Author's Response: I didn't see it coming either, tpfan, or I assure you, I would have ducked to miss it. I don't know if they'll actually have sex while Parker is in cuffs- oh, I don't know. I think of that other fic, that monstrosity and I cringe at the idea. We shall see. Thanks for the R&R!
[Report This]Date: 16/04/11 09:59 pm
Ohhhh, smut!!! Your muse has his/her mind in the gutter Mirage but after s/he ran away with a waiter that looked like MTW who can blame her/him? I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: My muse is a female- most days, remy, but yes, her mind has gone to gutterville. Thanks for the R&R. Reviewer: remy09 Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 15/04/11 10:32 pm
uhuuu,that doesn't sound good. A seriously angry (and heated up..not just by the sun) Jarod and a MissP cuffed to a bedpost. Oh boy,I do feel bad for her. Fates really bites her in the ass eeeverytime.
Your story comments sounds promising. ;-) It's about time that those to get some sex. Even if it's "just" in this story.
Oh please cold-shoulder the muse if she's not willing and DO write a twincest story! Would love to do that myself,but oh the lack of time I have. *sigh*Can't wait toread your version of evil baby brother L vs. Ice Queen MP. ;-)
So keep on writing,for it is soooo entertaining (and why the hell would YOU of all people need a beta reader?!?)
Author's Response:
Haha, IceAngel, no, it's not good at all. They will get some sex, not "just" in this fic. They've already had sex in the other fic, updated just a few days before I posted this fic.
Yep, I will definitely tell the muse to fuck off if she's doesn't want to write a twinnie fic and I know what you mean. No time. Between work, school, volunteer work, pets, friends and family, there is no time for Mirage. I will continue writing and look forward to reading more from you. Thanks, IceAngel.
And haha, I nearly fell out of bed laughing after reading the beta question.
Reviewer: IceAngel Signed [Report This]Date: 13/04/11 09:41 pm
Long live the muse that created this one :). I love love love it. Such a perfectly Pretender start...can't wait to see where our journey takes us...personally I hope we spend a few nights in smutville....Looking forward to another chapter let the muse have her way :)....Oh yeah almost forgot my manners...Please, Pretty please....with sugar on top:)
Author's Response: Thanks, aldysgal. I never attempted smut so fingers crossed but yes, a few nights sounds about right, I think. Haha, sugar on top? I can't say no to that. *smiles*
Date: 13/04/11 02:09 pm
I'll happily feed your muse whatever substance she desires if you'll keep up these stories! An intriguing start - I like to see Jarod knocked off his game a bit (even if he gets control back in the end), and it did begin to strain credulity on the show when he could just pop up anywhere and not ever be recognized by members of the same occupation. It's not like you see men that look like that every day (well, I don't)! And that Parker showed up to claim him - perfect!
Now that she's all chained up with nowhere to go, whatever shall they do?? :)
Author's Response:
Thanks, Jane. I feel the same way every time I watch the show. Eventually, it seems like someone would recognize him or he'd screw up and not be able to lie his way out of trouble.
Hmm, I don't know. What shall they do? Hmm, decisions, decisions. *evil grin*
Reviewer: Jane Q. Doe Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 13/04/11 09:44 am
It ended with Parker chained to the bed...Naughty thoughts....loving it so far.
Author's Response: Thank you, g18. Glad you're liking it.
[Report This]Date: 13/04/11 08:26 am
It's great of course that this was hurled at you lol. This is so like Parker and like Jarod too ..always loved it when he was thrown off during a pretend and how he righted the situation and regained control. I love this story already and mm..smut, love the idea of Parker in cuffs and mmm getting it on with Jarod...but it's your story. I can't wait for the smut can't wait to see what Jarod does with the shift in power. Update soon. And yaaya, if you are really planning to write a twincest fic one day, looking forward to that too.
Author's Response:
Thanks, TheDarkAngel, hmm, so you want Parker in cuffs WHILE "getting it on with Jarod"? Fascinating (I'm having a Freud moment).
I will see what I can swing there without drifting over into non-consent boundaries. I doubt the muse will mind.
And yes, I am planning some twincest in the hopefully very near future.
Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Anonymous [Report This]Date: 13/04/11 01:44 am
