Its my favorite TV series and many other people also like it in my family.Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 20/05/16 12:12 pm
Aww, poor Miss P! Very well written, though, I enjoyed it immensely. I <3 Miss P and Tommy and you did well by them!
Author's Response: wow thank you danielle smiley face! Am so out-of-my-mind-excited that I already got reviews for this one...my very first piece,my baby.hihi. Was just jumping up and down in my room because of that. *grin* Very glad you enjoyed it!!! Hopefully I'll be able to write some more soon....now that I got received encouragement. :-)
Date: 03/04/10 07:29 am
What a sad piece, very well written but so sad Ice Angel. That was beautifully, heart wrenchingly PERFECT! I love the repetitive 'where Thomas felt at home' and that ending, wow, it was tied together so nicely. Home...died with him- Simply amazing.
I am so glad you shared this with us and I look forward to reading more from you. A definite 10!
Author's Response: Wow...Mirage.A review from YOU! Am feeling a sense of oh-my-gosh-I'm-so-honoured coming on. hihi. Thanks a LOT for reviewing!!! Am sooo excited that I received some feedback for my very first piece of work. And that people even seemed to like it. And that YOU would give it a 10... *speechless* Was kinda scared that the language wasn't used that well,but apparently was ok. And yes,it's a sad and kinda dark piece. But I wrote this last night,so I was in the mood for that.*grin* But do like the dark and sad stuff in stories anyway. Am really out of my mind that you enjoyed it that much and liked the repetitive-theme including the ending sentence...did spend quite some time to find a satisfying connection between Thomas' death, her current state of heart/mind and the and the theme. Oh and please do feel free to respond with constructive criticism as well if u feel like it. Improvement is always good. ;-) Hopefully I'll be able to write some more soon....now that I received such strong encouragement. :-) Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/04/10 06:10 am