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Title: Part Seven

I need to read more.

poor parker.

it's so exciting!!

 Reviewer: MissCatherine Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/08/09 06:14 pm
Title: Part Seven

P.S.: Wonder what they will think of Sydney . . .

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/08/09 03:29 pm
Title: Part Seven

Welll written emotional scenes, in fact I hurt for Parker! so to end my pain you need to keep writing.

Now, that was a good way to get you tor write---hopefully??

Honestly you did a great job expressing the emotions of each character as they dealt with each item that faced them. Christiane throwing the glass at Jarod! Great friend to have expressed herself and then to do what Jarod lacked the courage to do - allow Parker to know there was more going on. She actually brought the story ahead. Good job with finidng another way to move the story along. Wonderful tool. 

I am so curious as to who is what and why that I do look forward to seeing more, hopefully soon??

Great writing! 

 

 

 

 

 

 Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/08/09 02:30 pm
Title: Part Seven

I love that you brought Jarod's family in this story and that they are 'apprehensive' about this marraige. It wouldn't be very realistic that they would welcome her with open arms in the family. I am looking forward to read more about this and their first meeting! I hope Jarod will be on Parker's side. . . Please hurry with the next chapter!  

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/08/09 01:24 pm
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