Oooh got to say that you've got me hooked lol! Everything about this piece is so intriguing (I love, love, love the chapter titles by the way-pure genius on your part!!), all the character dialogues are great too (especially the Jarod/Parker phone call this chap), and the ease with which you've worked Jarod into the middle of the White House (while sticking to the characters there too... *smiles*). And who doesn't want to know what 'one-six-seven' is, or more importantly, how secure it is??
There certainly 'aint no damn crickets here -just a bulldozer to help with the 'demolitioninging' of the writer's block! ;)
Can't wait to read the next chap (hint, hint...)
Author's Response:
Thank you greatly for the kind words. The chapter titles are shamelessly lifted from West Wing, but they're so subtle and fit fairly well, so what the heck. "Good writers borrow from other writers, great writers steal."
It's not a who, so much as a little word play. You'll see in the next chatper, which will be coming soon. Thanks again :D
Reviewer: jk Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 16/04/09 05:03 am
