Very nice chap!  I'm still enjoying this story, especially the extended focus on Jarod in this chapter.  You delved deeper into his character, and that can only be a good thing.  I loved your portrayal of Toby!

A few quibbles:  Mr. Parker's title is Chairman of the Centre, not Director of Operations.  Also, it was a bit tough to place this in the West Wing timeline, probably because you named the chapters after season 1 episodes but set them in season 2.  I think I'm clear now, and I'm not gonna complain because the ep titles are just too awesome!

I really enjoyed the bit where Jarod passed a DSA player off as a ZIP drive.  Poor Josh would truly be lost without Donna.

It's great to see your writing growing.  Best of luck as you develop this!