Squee! Crossover!
I'm very intrigued by this first chapter. The writing has a good rythm, and you seem to have a good handle on the characters. One niggle: Sydney is a psychiatrist, not a psychologist. Though IMO, the work he does would be more typical to a psychologist, there are frequent references in the show to him, in fact, being in psychiatry.
I'm a huge WW fan, so it was a nice treat to get that little twist at the end. I'm looking forward to seeing how you develop those characters. I've actually toyed with the idea of this particular crossover myself, but could never get my lazy butt motivated to actually write it. "Jarod Sorkin," LOL! Just the kind of tongue in cheek humor the show did best.
Best of luck with this! I'll keep reading.
Author's Response: Thanks greatly! I find it interesting that these first three parts, even though written ages ago, are still apprantly of some quality. With everything you've contributed to Pretender fics, I'm curous to hear your thoughts on parts 4 and 5, which are entirely new. Reviewer: MP Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/02/09 06:47 pm
