Wow, amazing story and very well written, I couldn't stop reading! I was a bit surprised by the evil Thomas but I enjoyed it anyway. The ending is so satisfying! The Centre bursting into flames... wow!Reviewer: Cara Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/05/19 07:58 am
Hi just read your story it was very good.Reviewer: Katescats Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 18/08/14 07:50 am
Great job again! I loved the little bit about Debbie cooking and mentioning the ice cream. I knew Miss P must really have amnesia- didn't think she'd be able to kiss Jarod so much if she was really just faking! ;) Hopefully Sam will really be on her side like I always thought he was, and help her and Jarod figure it out.Reviewer: Danielle SmileyFace Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/10 05:13 am
Just started with this story and again:wow! oh how I love your Parker descriptions! You're able to make her come to "life" like nearly no one else does. Amazing!
Especially liked this part:"She wouldn’t be Miss Parker if she sobbed. She does not. Her shoulder are perfectly still, her body does not move..". you're dead-on she wouldn't be MP if she sobbed. The way how u describe her outfits and everything: just so much fun to read. "The black creature she is...","She smooths the raven hair back with both hands and I can see her blood-red nails disappear and appear again in its mass."...*sighs* I can see her before my eyes...Thanks for that!
Laughed out loud at the "Are u on drugs?" comment. Fact that she doesn't just knocks him out for that one is proof enough that she snapped. ;-)
And loved the part wit her car being parked squarley across Broots' front yard.had a good laugh at that,too. So Miss Parker!hahaha!
can't wait to see what this story has in store for me. (turning over to chapter2)
Date: 05/04/10 12:05 am
Another favorite! Lyle sections were amusing. Interesting background fill ins on how things came to be. Great Catherine possibilities on what her talent possessed. Cool twist on Thomas story. I've always wondered how far the Centre maneuvered everything.Reviewer: electricq Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/01/10 03:52 am
That was a good story. Thank you for sharing. I do have a question though. How did Miss Parker miss Thomas having a heartbeat when she checked on him. Glad that the Centre is gone and everyone was okay after it.
sorry, I seem to have just missed replying to your review earlier. :-)
I don't really know. The reason was Parker's distress, probably, or some sort of medication that affected Thomas' vital signs.
Thanks for your review!Reviewer: Ann Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 20/12/08 08:21 pm