Reviews For Barely a Whisper
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Title: Chapter 1

Oy, vey. Wonderful. Again, I'm taking Gem in a somewhat different direction, but wonderful nonetheless.

Author's Response: Cheers, I've only now restarted working on this fic, with the idea to take it in a somewhat different direction than the original plan... Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Haiza Tyri Signed [Report This]
Date: 18/06/09 09:46 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Oh, this is so nice! And it is an improvement, I think, in the way of emotional depth and the characters' reasoning behind their actions, but also because of the small observations of the small behaviours that mean so much but aren't usually taken notice of.

I'll be waiting for any future chapters.

I'd give it a rating too, but I'm terribly awful at them. It truly frightens me when a questions starts with 'On a scale of one to ten'.


planet p.

P.S.: From FF.Net.

Author's Response: Thank you very much planet p, very brave of you to leave the first comment for the new and improved version of BaW! Glad you like it!

Reviewer: planet p Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/03/09 03:19 pm
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