Great part and so soon! By the way I like that you every time response to our reviews.Thank you!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the kind review dimana.
Yes, of course I respond to reviews. Positive or negative, reviews are helpful and if someone reads my story and takes the time to leave a review, the least I can do is respond.
Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: dimana Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/04/09 09:42 pm
The goodbyes were so sad... You almost made me cry! Hope they could get better together... but it would mean that the story is almost finished, which i hope not! I still want more!!!!
Poor Lyle... it's always the sexiest that go first!!!
Author's Response:
Hi Faith! I'm afraid this piece is far from over but I am thrilled that you want more. Yes, I know, poor Lyle but it's just the way the story goes...
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing Faith!
Reviewer: Faith Parker Signed [Report This]Date: 01/04/09 11:03 am
Oh My God!! It keeps getting better and better and we keep wanting more and more!! Hope you'll post soon because I don't think I want to wait any longer!!!
Author's Response: Hi Faith! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you think it's getting better and I'm thrilled that you want more. It gives me hope that maybe I'm doing something right. I just posted the next bit- You don't have to wait any longer. :-)
Date: 31/03/09 03:03 pm
hey this story is really good update soon
Author's Response: Thanks huhuhu! I just updated!
Date: 28/03/09 08:54 pm
You are so good with surprises and always leave us at the "best moment"! Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you dimana for reading and reviewing. Yeah, I had to toss in that little surprise. So glad you approve. Thanks again!
Date: 28/03/09 10:11 am
Wow, verry emotional part and so well written!
Author's Response:
Hi dimana! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. This story is a work in progress and I was sort of stuck and very uncertain about that last chapter. (But then, I was unsure of every chapter..nothing new there. ;-) ) I'm still uncertain about the remainder and the ending but the reviews are so encouraging. Thanks again!
Reviewer: dimana Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/03/09 10:28 am
another very well written chapter again. I'm always sooooo excited when you update :)
Author's Response: Thank you for the encouragement and kind words. You are all too kind!
Date: 19/03/09 08:12 pm
more chapters please :) it's always a pleasure to read your story
Author's Response: There are more chapters, maybe not too many though. ;-) Thank you so much! It's a pleasure to read these fantastic reviews.
Date: 18/03/09 02:02 am
another beautiful chapter. you totally made ma day :) keep them coming
Author's Response:
Hi! Thank you so much! I'm thrilled that it made your day and I will keep them coming. (I'll try.)
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 17/03/09 02:15 am
can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :) Keep on writing a few more chapters please
Author's Response:
Hi. A new chapter is currently in the works! Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/03/09 12:52 am
Ah.. not to worry about typos! I noticed none!! the story keeps me so entranced that I never notice your typos! besides I'm notorious for them, I wouldn't dare mention or notice anyone else has them!
This story has kept me captured by its edginess and the depth of your insight into the characters. Sometime ago there were many stories written about Jarod's dark side, but this is in a catagory all by itself.
I look forward to reading more. Thank you for continuing and for sharing your work.
Author's Response:
Hi nightowl. In a category by itself? I hope that's a good thing.:-)
I have quite a bit of difficulty with the characters (particularly P & J) which is one reason why this fic is taking so long to write. With that said, your comment regarding my insight into the characters means so much. It has been a major issue and will continue to be.
I hope to update soon.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 04/03/09 01:03 am
Spectacular! I just LOVE this! Please update very soon! This is the best story I've read in ages!
(You can see how excited I am by the number of exclamation marks I used. :-D)
Author's Response:
Wow! I know I don't deserve such a compliment but thanks just the same.
I will update as soon as possible. Thanks for reading and reveiwing.
(Your story is great btw.)
Reviewer: Miss Shannon Signed [Report This]Date: 03/03/09 02:36 pm
That's a wonderful story! I'm really dying to find out what kind of help Jarod needs... and what happened!
Your writing is very good, the story line is unexpected and brilliant, and you never disappoint us!!!
Oh and thank you so much! When I saw that there were TWO new chapters, I was delighted!!! Keep writing, and post soon!!! ;-)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much Faith! Your review is very encouraging. Hopefully, you won't be disappointed. I hope to have the next chapter up soon. Thanks again.
Reviewer: Faith Parker Signed [Report This]Date: 03/03/09 12:32 pm
I'm enjoying this fic so much! Can't wait to find out what is going on!
Author's Response: Thanks dimana. I'm trying to get that sorted out. Thanks for reading!
Date: 03/03/09 09:31 am
You have written it so true to the characters!
Author's Response: Hi Nicola. Thanks so much for reading and for taking the time to review.
[Report This]Date: 21/02/09 10:23 am
Wow, well done. This story certainly didn't go as I expected. You packed quite a punch with all the trails and undertones.
I think this is one I need to read again all at once to see if I can pick up on some of the well written mazes.
This was very impressive. Did you work it out bit by bit or did you know from the beginning all the twists and turns?
Very well written.
Author's Response:
Hi nightowl. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
The original idea (on paper) was for Parker to find Ethan in the cabin.
And then, I started typing. It's definitely a bit by bit piece.
Thanks again!
Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/02/09 05:36 am
loved that you posted 2 new chapters. This fanfic totally sucks me in so please keep on updating soon.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. I will be working on the next bit this weekend and will hopefully update soon. Thanks again!
Date: 19/02/09 12:54 am
When can we expect another wonderful chapter? I can't wait :)
Happy Valentine's day!!!!
Author's Response:
I can't promise you that they will be wonderful but I just posted two new chapters. Thanks for reading.
Hope you had a great "V" day too!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/02/09 11:19 pm
Hi !
I'm a long time fan of the Pretender but I lost myself only recently again in the nostalgy of The Pretender. I really miss this serie and particularly the chemistry between Jarod and Miss Parker.
I agree that you're a great author I really like this story a lot, it's well written and even if a little disturbing in this last chapter I like a lot your portray of all the characters. I regret that someimes Mrs Parker isn't as strong in some fics, but i find that you portray her really well.
Thanks great story and awesome imagination :D
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. I'm pleased that you (a long time fan) like this piece. I'm still sort of new to the show and it's encouraging to hear from someone who has been a fan of the show for a while.
You are very kind and I appreciate the compliments. I feel that I will never live up to them but I will try.
Again, thanks for reading and for the lovely review.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/02/09 10:01 pm
This is such a different, twisted but extremly good story. I'm so hooked :) I love this fanfic and I think it's one of the best I've ever read. If there was a whole book of it I couldn't wait to read it. It's written so well. So please tell me you have a lot more chapters coming. I can't wait but don't make Jarod any creepier Ok cause I don't want him to be the baaaaad guy who is not better than Lyle
Author's Response:
That is quite a compliment. I don't deserve it but thanks just the same.
This piece is more twisted than even I had expected it to be and yes, more chapters are in the works. I understand completely and although I don't know exactly what direction the story will take, I do have my limits on "creepiness". :)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/02/09 01:04 am
oh please tell me this isn't the end
Author's Response:
It's not the end.
Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/02/09 12:53 am
you really really are insane
Author's Response:
"Psychological diagnosis can be really subjective." ;)
Reviewer: loveyoujar Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 31/01/09 03:33 pm
you are really insane
Author's Response:
Aren't we all?
Reviewer: loveyoujar Anonymous [Report This]Date: 31/01/09 03:29 pm
Well now i'm completely hooked! Today i was so bored but you made my day, thank you!
Author's Response:
Thank you dimana. I'm glad it made your day!
Reviewer: dimana Anonymous [Report This]Date: 31/01/09 02:12 pm
My God!!! I really want to read more! This is so new, and different, I've never read a fanfic like this one (and I've read many!)Just amazing!!! I want more, and soon would be great! Keep going, it's just excellent, twisted but so good!
Author's Response:
Thanks. I expected to log on today and either read negative reviews or no new reviews at all. It is a twisted piece and very different than anything I ever expected to write.
Glad you like it. You will get more and very soon, I hope. Thanks again for reading!
Reviewer: Faith Parker Signed [Report This]Date: 31/01/09 10:46 am
