Wow. A happy ending or the promise of one, and that's all we ever wanted. Oh, Mirage. I love this. I know you aren't a shipper but I'm thankful to you for giving us this amazing win. Thank you so much.
Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed
[Report This]Date: 10/06/25 05:06 am
"Never." Oh, Jarod. I weep for that man. I commend the way he held it together when Parker told him the truth about his father. He was worried for her and cared about nothing else. That's how much he loves her. Amazing. The subtleties are brilliant.
Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed [Report This]Date: 10/06/25 05:04 am
Those chapter titles. It was like that on the series. Jarod would be progress, a step forward, and then bam two steps back. The struggle is real with those 2.
Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed [Report This]Date: 10/06/25 05:01 am
It is important for patients to try to remember what happened to them. Your Doctor Jarod is awesome by the way. Damn. SO hot. I can literally SEE them in everything you write. Gah. I love it so hard.
Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed [Report This]Date: 10/06/25 04:59 am
Jarod always with the gentle nudge. I like this. They leave it open and unresolved during the tv series so this I like more, because either Ben is her father or Jarod is a cruel manipulative liar for leading Parker to believe that Ben is her father. I wouldn't want her to be with him if he lied and deceived her that much.Thank you for redeeming him.
Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed [Report This]Date: 10/06/25 04:56 am
Dark. Gloriously dark. Oh. *BOWS DEEPLY*
Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed [Report This]Date: 10/06/25 04:52 am
I'm a little afraid of how dark this might get. So far everything seems typical of the series. I'm really excited too because it feels like watching an episode. You are addicting.
Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed [Report This]Date: 10/06/25 04:50 am
I love your ability to make the writing so vivid that I'm there with the characters, and I love how in character they all are. The action's terrific. I like the pacing, that you don't bog me down in excessive detail. You strike a balance that satisfies me.
Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed [Report This]Date: 10/06/25 04:45 am
Oooh snap another multi-chapter story from Mirage. I thought I had read this one years ago but I didn't. I was missing out. This one really hits. First chapter is sharp and plunges us into Centre action invoking ALL of The Pretender feels. Your writing is like magic or miracles. I love it.
Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed [Report This]Date: 10/06/25 04:41 am
Pretender perfection.
Thank you.
Reviewer: lisa Signed [Report This]Date: 02/06/25 03:30 am
I was cheering for a happen ending the entire time I want you to know ’ ’ 😘
Reviewer: lisa Signed [Report This]Date: 02/06/25 03:28 am
Parker has her own side thing going and no one else knew because she is Parker. That tracks.and she's so bad ass.
Reviewer: lisa Signed [Report This]Date: 02/06/25 02:52 am
Stay.
That's enough said. What better said!
Reviewer: lisa Signed [Report This]Date: 02/06/25 02:50 am
Just all the oomphs!After a second read through it still hits 🎯
Reviewer: lisa Signed [Report This]Date: 02/06/25 02:47 am
Damnn. Lyke is so snarky and darkly funny.. a wrong morbid funny. You tapped into him and all of the characters. I love that Jarod has to physically and forcefully pull parker away from Lyle to keep her from killing him with her bare hands. So amazing 😍 🤩
Reviewer: lisa Signed [Report This]Date: 02/06/25 02:45 am
Truth is in every word. You really watched the series closer than I did and the characters. I'm in awe over here. I'm also in the edge of my ‘
Reviewer: lisa Signed [Report This]Date: 02/06/25 02:41 am
Oh Sydney. Relax Parker. Um no syd. It's hard to relax.
Everyone is in character. This goes so fast, too. Love the rich details and transitions.
Reviewer: lisa Signed [Report This]Date: 02/06/25 02:37 am
Heteropaternal superfecundation would explain why Jarod left Parker down the rabbit hole WHILE Mr. Parker changed and began being more loyal with Kyle and keeping secrets from parker.
Lyle was still in the loop but Parker wasn't.
Or Jarod was lying about ben which wouldn't be good of Jarod.
I love it. thought provoking and we'll written as always
Reviewer: lisa Signed [Report This]Date: 02/06/25 02:35 am
YESSSSS "but she isn't you." OH MY GOD. Oh my god! Best thang EVER!
Thank you!
Reviewer: needlepoint Signed [Report This]Date: 17/04/25 02:59 am
I'm still hoping for a happy ending. Please I hope it's so!
Reviewer: needlepoint Signed [Report This]Date: 17/04/25 02:57 am
Damn but Parker is so bad ass even when injured. And she is stubborn. So bloody stubborn.
Reviewer: needlepoint Signed [Report This]Date: 17/04/25 02:53 am
Peek a boo gown lol. Parker and her colorful snark. IT can't almost be over already. I could read it forever.
Reviewer: needlepoint Signed [Report This]Date: 17/04/25 02:50 am
Yay. Ben. Ben is her father. That would redeem Jarod for sending her to Lake Catherine and making her think Ben is her father. We never learn the truth in the series. That's why fanfic exists! YAY!
Reviewer: needlepoint Signed [Report This]Date: 17/04/25 02:47 am
Jarod knew. God. He KNEW. I love it.
I love that Jarod had to PHYSICALLY stop Parker to prevent her from killing Lyle. But what they were going to do to her. I DON'T BLAME PARKER.
Reviewer: needlepoint Signed [Report This]Date: 17/04/25 02:44 am
Oh, god. I read the next chapter because I was freaking out and had to know what happened next. Lyle is a bastard. We knew that but yeah, this tracks.
Reviewer: needlepoint Signed [Report This]Date: 17/04/25 02:30 am
