nicely done, you tell your story with skill. I've enjoyed it from the first chapter, however, I've had some problems with posting a review, so... just to let you know I'm still reading and continue to enjoy. And with every chapter I hold my breath and hope it is not the last one.... hate to see a good story end!
Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/04/09 02:10 am
OMG! Sydney is her father? I can't believe it but Jarod is in big trouble! I hope he'll be able to get out of it but there will be hell to pay the captain. Thanks for the update because I have been waiting for it!
Reviewer: Quita Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15/04/09 05:02 am
Uh oh, Jarod's in trouble now. So will she take off and leave him behind, (still snoring) call the sweeps in or kick his butt? I can't wait to find out!
Excellent chapter!!
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 14/04/09 03:04 am